Life Is Just

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by citrus_seas, Sep 2, 2005.

  1. citrus_seas

    citrus_seas Senior Member

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    The desert is just an ocean, engulfed in sand,
    Eroding inside of the palm of some fool's hand,
    The lake of desert existence floats mysteriously,
    Swimming in it's own absence, unable to see.

    The moon is just like the sun, eclipsed by a shadow,
    Trying to break the spell of the darkness, but it just doesn't know,
    For the forever void of the moon will last forevermore,
    It is trapped in the night to escape no more.

    Life Is Just..
    Life Is Just..
    Life Is Just..
    What Is Life?

    Her eyes are just like crystals shimmering in the sky,
    Treading the air while trying to fly,
    Only to be shot down by another war's wrong,
    That's going currently while I sing this song.

    A plane is just a bird in its metallic flight,
    Bursting through the clouds in the opaqueness of night,
    Soaring in the kind deliverance of morning air,
    With the people that waste their lives but haven't a care.


    Life Is Just..
    Life Is Just..
    Life Is Just..
    What Is Life?

    War is just an excuse for failure of success,
    And they blame it on our music, indulgence and excess,
    Nobody wants capitalism or any democracy,
    Just a little peace on earth and a chance to be free.

    Death is just like giving eyesight to the blind,
    In the darkness of the abyss or the colors of your mind,
    It's not really the end, just a haltness of being,
    Enslaved and chained and pained by the living.


    Life Is Just..
    Life Is Just..
    Life Is Just..
    What Is Life?

    Life is just a series of acts in a play,
    Is there a God, is Jesus real, no one can really say,
    No real proof, no real truth, all mostly lies,
    Try to say you know the facts and look me in the eyes.


    Life Is Just..
    Life Is Just..
    Life Is Just..


    Life Is Just..
    Life Is Just..
    Life Is Just..
    What Is Life?
     
  2. Stag4

    Stag4 Member

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    That is deep. That makes you think.
     
  3. peaceloveandmusic

    peaceloveandmusic Member

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    It really does make you think. cool
     
  4. Jack_Straw2208

    Jack_Straw2208 Senior Member

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    hey robot, isnt life just, TOTALLY COOOOOOOL, and AWESOME!?!?

    WHAT IS LOVE!?!?!?!? BEEP BEEEP

    im going to destroy you =)



    when i get you into my pit of snakes, then you will see my true power!
     
  5. soulrebel51

    soulrebel51 i's a folkie.

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    with practice, you could be a writer for some space rock jam band, like Vim's Spaceship.

    keep writing! :)
     
  6. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    groovy man, it's deep.
     
  7. EmbraceInnerPeaches

    EmbraceInnerPeaches Member

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    This is truly awesome!!!!
    <3~Peaches
     
  8. useless poet

    useless poet Member

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    Hi Citrus Seas,i see you have put a lot of thought in to these words,i think if you keep it up ,you will one day be quite a talented song writer,it is very deep stuff,something to be proud of,well done to you.
     

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