Life Before

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by celestecat, Aug 22, 2005.

  1. celestecat

    celestecat Member

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    Life Before
    Months ago there was only her
    living a free life. Casual liaisons
    came naturally. Creeping hands through the semi-darkness,
    he comes to rest,
    grazing like spiders-web over her sloping thighs.
    A stranger’s touch, the most she could bare.
    Slumbering after, in a stranger’s arms
    like leaping into the black-soul pool,
    skimming the shallows of the heart.

    Now, in the night, is her curving belly,
    shaped slowly by her tentative hand.
    Embryonic dreams which search for her
    through the shades of a certain caring.
    She fears the imminent arrival.
    The inner Awakening of the
    Profound, the opening of her eyes
    to another.

    Emotions she has sifted through since
    that long-ago morning on the hard floor
    of her green-tiled bathroom are
    threatening to drown her as she gazes into
    their unfathomable depths.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    damn, that's deep. Nicely done.
     
  3. sundust

    sundust Member

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    Gosh i was trying to read this poem while i was on the phone - it left me so lost for words!
     
  4. TheLizardQueen

    TheLizardQueen horny for knowledge

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    Lovely. It's the type of poetry I like. Good job!
     

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