Let me see your creative side

Oh, Kinky Ramona made that for me a few years ago.

 

Oooohhh. It was pretty rad. I thought you made it... I am let down. But that poem still rocks ass for how small and quick it was.

Didn't pork have a sig pic kinda like yours? I think I remember there being smoke and his name on there too.

I'm genuine I love my sig pic, and I will never change it.

 

http://www.etsy.com/listing/67275963/snuggles-the-bunny <- a link for a bunny i crocheted

 

Yeah pork had a similar sig pic.

I think it's more of a short rap than a poem. lol It works either way though, I guess.

And yeah.....your sig pic is the shizz. One of my favorites, actually.

 

Yessss, I have been waiting for someone to compliment it I normally wouldn't care, but it took a long time to make :mickey:

 

yup, kinky ramona made it i
i might have to change it back now

i know better than to think that was a poem, man. i read that shit with a rap beat in mind.


brian jonestown massacre is good, but not really your creative side..

 

I just don't have a rap mindset unfortunately. The length of each verse made it look like a peom. I read rap more like this:


Crazy thoughts in my brain
as I look up at the sky
I'm staring at the world
through kaleidoscopic eyes
A chaotic kind of peace
with no barriers in place
I look like a madman
when you see my trippin face
Ingesting psychedelics
with no specific mission
But to drop out of reality
and decorate my vision
Hyperspacial bliss as I leave the world behind
Just to see what I can find in the depths of my mind

Read with no pause pause in between verses, and sped up at then end.

This is one I made for a girl I really liked. She dumped me after I read it to her :/ This is when she told me she wanted a "bad guy". I was a bad guy back then, looking for a good girl. Guess she was the opposite... I should have acted myself!! Got stoned and pushy sexually... (Not that that was me, but I was viewed as the rule breaker back then when I smoked weed! :O)

Celestial glory is your name
Your beauty shines just like a flame
Through your face and deep throughout
To your beauty there is no doubt
To all others know, they are simple taint
You are my santo, you are my saint

 

That's exactly how I intended for it to be read. I just didn't split the lines up, so people could connect them properly and not get confused. lol

That's pretty good.

And yeah.....I hate that shit. I'd consider myself to be the "bad boy" type, but I'm never anything but a gentleman toward females and I treat them like gold, even when I don't want a relationship or want to fuck them.

Check this out. Some dude named Brandon Gregory tried to kill me in a rap verse he wrote on facebook, and this was my response. BTW, this is how I usually write rap, with the slashes in between each line. When you read it, you have to arrange/stretch the syllables a certain way for it to flow properly:

"Tie you up and torture you, your body's gettin chopped/ it's a lot more fun than poppin off a couple shots/ now you're cryin and your pleadin/ cuz your skin is ripped and bleedin/ it's time to split your skull and leave your fuckin head leakin/ then I cook you on the stove, so I can eat your body parts/ it's a three-course meal, but I don't know where to start/ first I'll eat your kidneys, then it's time to eat your heart/ it's really soft and tender when I tear the meat apart/ your brain is really tasty, so I'm savin it for last/ cleanin off my plate, I can't believe I ate so fast/ you're the victim of a cannibal, thank you for the feast/ you should've never fukt with me, cuz I'm a fuckin beast/ I got psychopathic tendencies/ when I slice my enemies/ and that's how it happened to this bitch named Brandon Gregory"

 

Just me fuckin around:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2teRK5mz7JY"]YouTube - Random Verses By TopNotch

 

I do haiku.

the road has been fixed
lines of tar on the asphalt
shadows made substance

 

The answers came to me as they trickled down my spine. I caught them in my hand and stored them in my ear. They laughed and sang and danced across my eyelids.

Kaleidoscope colors bathing my spirit in rainbow warmth. It taste so sweet upon my tongue.

Euphoric dreams escape my lungs filling the clouds around me with soft spoken whispers.

Crystal fingertips caress my body expanding my mind with words so wet.

My thoughts flowing like rivers of mercury, silver and smooth.

Firework emotions exploding before me, quickly dissipating into faint memory.

These creatures that are among me elaborately fuse their bodies with mine as they weave in and out of my conscious.

Freshly awakend from a slumber so deep, Like a new born in this alien yet curious world.


Some crap I wrote in 02.

 

Nice job Good representation of synaesthesia.

 

love it

oh the humanity

 

I hung this last august 9th, to mark the 15th year since Jerry Garcia's passing.

 

Haha, nice. Have you ever tried doing some rhyming while tripping?


For those of you who haven't seen it, here's a short track I recorded a little while ago:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZvpCR8fgfs"]YouTube - Jamming..

 

Nah, I've never really attempted it when I was tripping, aside from writing some poetry for my ex. lol That's a bit different though.

 

http://www.myspace.com/solemnstem

Marsh and Prelude to the Myopic Keeper are worth listening to, everything I've posted is shit.

 

definitely had me tapping my toes
i forgot that i wasn't listening to my normal tunes:sunny:

not to keep spamming, but here's a webpage i made yesterday
https://sites.google.com/site/porkpage/gallery

 

Tetris!!!

 

:afro:
and nice flow, man. i'd still battle you though :tongue:

i agree.