leap of faith

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Bonsai, May 28, 2006.

  1. Bonsai

    Bonsai Member

    ...shall I take a 'leap of faith' and jump into new waters?

    leap of faith
    by Bonsai

    on so
    a Grasshopper goes
    to leap from where it stands

    there is no guarntee
    where it will be
    when it finally lands

    it knows not
    that death exists
    yet jumps to be safe

    and rides the wind
    to destiny's whim
    in a leap of faith
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

    I like this. I like the idea of how the grasshopper doesn't know if where it will land will be any better than it's current dangerous situation, but he leaps anyways, with the faith that it WILL be better. Nice stuff
  3. Bonsai

    Bonsai Member

    Thank You for the read/ comment~
    (~_~) bows humble~ Art

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