Kitten's Litter

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by KittenX, Jun 15, 2004.

  1. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Well done.
    My what a pleasure to embrace kismet,
    a sovereign sharing with other universes,
    to return with visions gleaned from our inner quests ~~*
     
  2. JJ DIAMOND

    JJ DIAMOND Member

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    Great poem, I WRITE BUT NOT THAT GOOD YET, your very talented
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    So sincere and full of feeling. Great poem.
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Locked arms
    behind the back
    lost key and

    gagged.

    Swollen tongues
    and heaving lungs,

    our strings untie.

    I roll over peaks
    and plummet,
    the crescent lips
    bow to slide

    under.

    Impregnated eyes
    gouge out
    to release a silent

    sigh.
     
  5. Raving Sultan

    Raving Sultan Banned

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    i thought this thread had cats in it
     
  6. natural23

    natural23 Senior Member

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  7. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I miss the ache and anger,
    the bitterness of being not the one

    I miss the charity of your consideration
    when accidental touch
    could promise momentary love.

    I want to be alarmed and triggered off.

    I never learn not to return
    or trust.

    Now I reconstruct your close-up,
    with jigsaw particles of chemical debris,
    your solid gaze is like a sum
    of foreign constellations,
    it declares distance,
    guards
    and yet invites.
     
  8. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Crickets scratch on the walls,
    scrape the tissue
    and the sides of my skull.

    The Jerusalem sky
    may crush me,
    as I loll in the red light
    district gutter.

    Startled strays avoid encounter,
    shadows flinch away.

    Clenching temples,
    I want to squeeze
    the crickets out
    before I burst
    in the endless
    sound.
     
  9. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    My mother stifles cries all night
    then in the morning she hides
    the swollen eyes.

    Tragedy must be the spice of life
    and irony laughs at all.

    I know the truth and when I face it
    I can’t help but suffer
    alongside with her.
     
  10. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    What
    About Death?

    It is hibernation in smoke,
    in the mind’s eye
    it is a condensation of
    arbitrary sketches.

    False memories
    define episodes
    of experience,
    an absurdity
    where there are no laws
    and yet the promises
    are broken
    and bystanders are
    chastised for being
    at the wrong place at the right time.

    What
    About Life?

    We are caught,
    windswept
    into a cobweb
    and struggling to
    reach out
    before exhaling
    a last breath.

    It all comes down to
    a padded network
    that can assure
    our existence
    is not a waste of
    resources and time.

    We search for a
    futile meaning
    in every abstract remark,
    deem ourselves upstanding,
    for every altruistic-egotistic
    act.

    Complications are our forte
    as we pretend to understand
    each other
    but instead we'd rather
    buy into
    the social slant.

    So embedded and isolated,
    it's impossible
    to budge and step outside
    the self-made coffer.

    For now we
    hibernate in comfort
    of a mutual mind fog.
     
  11. wideyed

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    the years ahead of you will not be easy.
     
  12. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Great form and content, there, KittenX.
    I'm happy to see your pouring out both
    quantity and quality again. :)
     
  13. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    -rekindle- rocks! i know that feeling quite well :)

    liked -paradox- and -terrorist- very mucho as well.... the last longer one had more of a prosaic feel, to me, but I identify with the philosophies there as well... very similar thematically to that mist and mirror one I posted recently....

    and I agree with sylvan, it's fantastic to see new stuff from you! kudos!
     
  14. natural23

    natural23 Senior Member

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    Harmony, even in dissonance.
     
  15. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    With a wispy lisp,
    she does not speak
    instead her dialogue
    is like a tango
    of syllables
    taking off
    from the tongue,

    childlike
    she’d pout her lips,
    or all of a sudden
    blare a tenacious smug,
    maneuver daring,
    clever eyes
    through a ravenous crowd.

    They will indulge
    in her presence,
    oblige
    in hopes of rewards.

    Such a divine,
    treacherous gender,
    she clearly knows
    the subtle supremacy,
    the inevitable tendency
    to manipulate all
    who come in contact
    and fall prey
    to the undeniable
    charm.

    Although
    she’s been a victim,
    acknowledged
    feminine faults
    to avoid conflict
    and earn respect,

    she has tamed
    the brittle pride of
    those
    who could never suspect
    that
    she has always been
    one step ahead.
     
  16. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    -femme- get's a big yes! beautiful on all fronts, looks like you've warmed up well and are feelin the flow! great selective use of rhyme and your line breaks are perfectly placed... enjoyed this one immensely.... thx for getting going again! :)
     
  17. Major Peacenik

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    the placement of "instead" in the first stanza nearly gave me a heart attack

    good going
     
  18. KittenX

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    Yvars caught the mood altering momentum,
    when the news splattered blood.
    And so all over the nation, in every house
    the broadcast amplified the chaos,
    the inferno of wailing mothers
    and shots of small bodies snapped.

    Yvars saw himself in every face
    and at once he was blown apart,
    the seconds paused - lingered in a blink,
    until receptors finally caught up

    His eyes were paralyzed
    and tongue turned cotton,
    as he gagged in an attempt to scream
    at the screen full of aimless comets .

    Yvars was aghast,
    as he glanced out the window
    at the red dust sky,
    he convulsed
    from the fact that he was still alive.

    In that instant somewhere above,
    the swollen stars collapsed.

     
  19. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Femme was absolutely terrific! But like in a perfume shop..I can't take in too many at once. (((((KittenX)))) You are always amazing.
     
  20. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Cold weather, crisp air
    and
    secondhand smoke
    remind me of shadows
    in vain prowling corners,
    in search of nothing at all.

    But as I inhaled the town,
    I fumbled with times
    when those shadows
    were the burnt out people
    I worshiped.

    And I don’t know now
    whether it’s better to
    let the dead rest
    or try to dig up the bones
    in feeble attempts
    of resurrecting the past.

    It’s tempting
    to gather yesterday's ash,
    to nourish the flames
    with sparks of flashbacks.

    but maybe none of this happened,
    maybe no one ever existed
    or
    mattered.
     

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