Kitten's Litter

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by KittenX, Jun 15, 2004.

  1. BlackBillBlake

    BlackBillBlake resigned HipForums Supporter

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    I love that Kitten.
    Some excellent stuff over these last pages

    Love & peace.
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I really hate to crush.

    To be captive in a brazen glance
    caught from the sidelines.

    To gnaw myself
    till I reach bone,
    when I see him standing
    by another.

    I sit in bedlam of the hours,
    rapt by how his beryl eyes
    reflect force, impulse and defiance.

    And as he pounces,
    squeezes my knee, draws on my nape,

    I quake for the impossible.
     
  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    -infatuation- left me speechless for a moment! awesome stuff, girl! don't change a thing, this one's as perfect as can be :)
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Our history is limited
    to prying glances
    and private monologues.

    But my random outburst,
    lax speech, and a recount
    of a humorous episode,
    inspired your attention.

    And you’ve just learned,
    I’m a prismatic paradox.
    I bundle up my intimacy
    away from proud strangers.

    But now I blossom,
    brave and naughty
    with frivolous charisma,
    class and foreign spice.

    So now you want to learn
    about my past and present,
    read iris memoirs,
    decode my secret words.
     
  5. *peace*child*

    *peace*child* Member

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    You're such a talented writer...I love all the ones I've read so far...Peace and love...
     
  6. KittenX

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    We stumbled upon one another
    at the crossroads of crosswords.

    I proposed a challenge,
    since I was awful cocky
    but only half decent.

    Declared you as my verbal rival.

    Although of course, we both knew
    it was a joke,
    made out of an attempt to tease
    intellectual urges
    and contact by proxy.

    But once we were snug, there was no use in
    censoring body language.

    Icebreakers have served their charm,
    and whetted our appetite.
     
  7. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    In a dingy notebook,
    I’ve drawn a heart
    around someone strange
    and anonymous.

    I wrote about missing him,
    constantly.

    I wrote about every incident
    that struck a chord.

    Until one fine morning,
    (eye-openers come with sunrise)
    I woke up healed and indifferent.

    Baggage off my shoulders,
    gone at once.

    I’ve earned the right to be selfish,
    with a suitcase full of tribulations.
     
  8. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Intruder.

    Who are you?

    I caught you
    red-handed
    probing the cookie jar.

    Satisfying interest.
    I’m still a novelty.

    My mistake,
    unlocked the door.

    Open opportunity
    and plenty for you to steal.
     
  9. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    When I wedge
    my crafty needles
    into the spines
    of the stagnated rabble,
    they fume
    but can’t retort.

    And I am tickled
    by all their useless,
    cooing babble.

    Too bad,
    I offer no pacifiers.
     
  10. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I read -curiosity- over the weekend, loved it thoroughly but was a little too, uh... out of it to comment at that time. So I'm back, and I loved this one... you really put a lot of yourself in your work and this one shows how talented you are at doing it.

    Your other new ones were just as good, and seem to flow right into one another... I'm tempted to suggest combining all of em and get an epic masterpiece kicking; that would be too cool.

    I enjoyed these thoroughly and am beginning to feel recharged, so many thanks to ya for sharing these! :)
     
  11. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    curled up limbs,
    tucked in lips,
    half-dressed
    sitting,
    sifting
    through
    scraps of
    mental shots.

    each frame
    flashes, freezes

    and for a second
    I breathe damp
    autumn,
    and blink rare tears.

    conjure up more snapshots
    to recall, to evoke,
    fill in the gaps,
    pretend and conceal
    my symptoms
    of guilt.
     
  12. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Last time I saw you,
    you still wore
    a beige trench coat
    and a black beret,
    waving to us
    on a train platform.

    Back at home,
    you shuffled
    your shackled feet
    and whined

    and I imitated adult
    impatience
    and adolescent pride.


    Let’s get out of
    this musky abode
    with no heat or
    hot water for years,
    heaps of tinted papers
    on couches,
    and a creaking linoleum
    bothering me at night.

    I am cramped here.

    Let’s leave already.

    But he hides our documents.
    Then strings lies.

    Stupid attempts to stall us
    at the doorway.

    He’s crazy you know
    and look now he’s crying,
    and begging not to leave him
    alone.

    We desert him,
    kiss on the cheek
    and wave goodbye,
    then scurry down the stairs,
    huffing and venting.
    We run through the mist
    with our luggage,
    to catch the late train.

    We would never return again.
     
  13. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    dedication continued...

    I didn’t write you out of vanity,
    selfish notions of isolation,
    “all that is not seen is nonexistent”

    And I’ve heard rumors,
    but was spared the involvement.
    Only a spectator,
    I speculated but offered
    little concern.

    Now expectations surface.

    But it’s a little late,
    and useless
    and kind of dirty
    to shout compassion.

    Feels insincere and wrong
    to glorify a loss which
    though it comes
    as a relief,
    it comes along with awkward.
     
  14. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    As a little girl of no more than eight,
    I often strolled on balconies.

    Inhaling chill of dawn,
    while counting ornaments
    of raindrop beads on metal rails.

    Bird’s eye view,
    milieu on my palm,
    and I peeked at the drab faces
    of opposite buildings,
    wondering if our own facade
    looked just as grim and lifeless.
     
  15. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    all of your dedications are exceptional, capturing sentiments I imagine most would have a difficult time expressing. The sincerity is tangible... those are some poems to be proud of, even if they're :(

    Hope all's well with you, and looking forward to more of this thread!
     
  16. KittenX

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    Tilted sun flirts
    with ceramic flowers.

    Wet apricot skin,
    makes taste buds
    buzz.

    X ray eyes,
    invade privacy.

    Rare humidity
    and unzipped mouths.

    Tongue tug-of-war.

    Pull me in
    for a
    rematch.
     
  17. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I liked this part most... I vote to call this one -rebound-
     
  18. KittenX

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    sore trachea,
    barking heat of lungs

    expel, expelling
    this septic enemy

    jammed air,
    shot vocal cords

    my temper
    shakes, claws
    at rib cage bars
    and walls,

    rips brittle sheath,
    to unleash
    a final roar.
     
  19. KittenX

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    Voices
    like fine powder
    circle round
    metro mound.
    Palms
    like translucent cloth,
    shield naked eyes.

    Centipedes dart
    back and forth,
    dodging beggars
    and heels.
     
  20. littleskinny

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    Really like Trachea - brutal scratchy vocab - effective.

    Not sure about Immortality yet....let me ponder! :)
     

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