Kissing salt (For GMC 5/5/15) Tangled together Legs and sheet and arms Hearts slowing, breaths steadying A cloud of curls in my eyes Lips by my ear Words I've waited to hear (And say) Fear and Joy trickle As lips kiss the salt away
I like it.I personally write more song lyrics than poetry.There are parallels between the two forms but also many differences.
For the actual responders, thank you. Even after years of my writing being published, my poetry, and song lyrics, have been more private. It wasn't easy to post them.
I just like making smart-ass comments every so often when the opportunity arises. I'm not trying to "get you" or target you or anything. I guess you are very sensitive about your poem, or suspicious of me, or both. It was intended to be funny, not offensive.
