Just Now

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by YogaOfLove, May 12, 2004.

  1. YogaOfLove

    YogaOfLove Member

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    i just started blurting out the feelings and this is how it came:

    Dually challenged in different worlds
    Its never been easy to leave hell
    Destruction, lifes demise
    The power in my hands is crippling.
    Completely deteriorated
    Is everything Ive had
    Crawling closer to the dark; into the hiding hole,
    a place reserved for utter remorse
    Punishing and relieving all thoughts from the past
    No pause, or stop no break nor cessation from life.
    Always going, each day better, each day worse
    Wishing and hoping -- no use at all
    Now towards the light where actions ensue
    Life, Death, Heart, Anger, Love, Cry, Hope, Fail, Try
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    this is great to read

    how passive you seem with all
    the emotions you dealing with
    i enjoyed reading this alot
    it gave me a sense of movement
    in your heart and i felt uplifted
    as i read ..
    love n peace from saff

    i hope you heal soon....
  3. eccofarmer

    eccofarmer Member

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    Very very moving!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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