I need a name for this one! Would love some help to name it!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Charlotte84, May 28, 2007.

  1. Charlotte84

    Charlotte84 Member

    We'll argue tonight

    but not for long

    he knows his touch

    can heal whats wrong.



    We'll get all hot

    a little less tight

    the last thing I'll remember

    will not be this fight



    For my passion will still

    encourage him till

    I am broken and bruised

    in love and confused



    Skin touching skin

    lips touching lips

    he will melt himself

    between my hips



    Then i'll be left there lying

    indulged and flying

    exhausted but,

    no longer crying

    -Charli
     
  2. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

    Call it Make up sex.
     
  3. ^ i agree. MAKE UP SEX is the perfect name for this
     
  4. just_poetic

    just_poetic Member

    this was nice and the name they specified above fits perfectly
     
  5. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

    I tried to pick a line or two that I like more than the rest and ended up with 60% of the poem. Melting himself between you hips is a wonderful image and describing post-coital bliss as indulged and flying is fucking spot on. I really like this poem. As for the title, I'm not sure. You haven't had the fight yet, but know what is going to happen so maybe, Lustful Resignation.

    Anyway, thanks for the opportunity of reading, please keep posting.

    Peace,
    Aidan
     

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