i.c.u. in i see you

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by vodoo chile, Jun 15, 2006.

  1. vodoo chile

    vodoo chile Member

    the tv blared static in the corner of the room.i awoke in a daze the smell of piss ran down my leg.i knew sometime here had to have happen the blood on my hands said it all.i lit up a fag {:cigarette} looking around not having a clue as to what happen or where i was.but then a scarf on the floor said it all.she had been here that dirty whore.death had been here she always did this to me.



    this is the begging of a book im writing called New Hamsphere 1942 its a detective type case.if i could make a movie def. black and white just keep that in mind black and white.
     
  2. AerialReaver

    AerialReaver Member

    thats fucking awesome man
     
  3. ayahuasca

    ayahuasca Member

    sounds like the beginning of an interesting story.
     

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