Ok, so I'm not a poet, but I was just flowing some stuff yesterday. Actually, kinda curious what folks think. You can be honest, but be nice because I don't often share this personal stuff. Well, ok, this isn't personal personal, but it did come from real feelings. K, listen. (no title yet) adrenaline heed bite the hand that feeds the more you get the less you've got missing somthing I could never be fearing that which is deep within me full of cliches how they never cease I'm not creative, but I never get peace things begin but nothing ever comes to "complete" dot dot dot... (no title, but a Linkin Park/Chester tribute, with a bit of other numetal influences in mind) stomach crawling, crawling in my skin (ugh!) f'! now I'm haunted by my disease! the disease lives in words and in memories the poetry of a once great fantastic band. I can't "I can't go on" "stretching to thin" "it's all too much to take in" Will your memory be preserved in these humble lines or perversed because I lack certain skills to rhyme? but here is where it hits and stings because you see, i think I need this thing this fan never even knew what she was missing but it all comes back to me in the lyrics that you bring been hiding around feelings all week long can't tell what is better, don't know right from wrong lost a member of my "numetal trilogy" someone said, it's like missing a piece of family it all meant so much to them and them and me ohh how can this be? How can it be??!!!
I think it's good man... very nice to do a tribute to Chester there, especially with that first line in the second part (crawling in my skin)... I actually really enjoyed that album of theirs when I was in college... and I did see them in concert, sounded excellent live... I wanted to see them outside but I never got to... ... with my writing I keep a journal/notebook... some I have turned into songs and some are simply poetry that maybe one day i'll try to put to music... it's a great release, from my experience... I like what you've written
