Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SillyLidlSkull, Jan 4, 2005.

  1. Tracking wales of ocean
    tramping into a linguistic livid
    Lusted in a scent of dissolution
    ..derivations of what
    ..derivationd of seen
    Tainted abrasion of dipping strokes;
    (some kind of decomposed breaths..).
    Jumping across wasted re-applying air
    Just a lunatic explosion of
    new archaic waste.
    Buy me a longer fresh taste
    of "ciclicita'
    Piece of destiny
    Piece of lived destroyment
    Piece of tile
    piece of hostile hope
    Tickleing away..
  2. wideyed

    wideyed Member

    i cant say i understand, but that doesnt mean i dont like it. Its got some unusual wordplay in it, which is cool...
  3. thanks for your appreciation!

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