Helix Heart

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by monarch, Aug 22, 2005.

  1. monarch

    monarch Member

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    DROP and
    watch me swirl as my heart
    moves
    through the counterclockwise motions of a
    smooth
    and swiftly moving current of tears, a
    salt-
    water river running through this bowl of
    marble,
    self-devouring, self-creating
    snake,
    emerging from my tears
    and feeding on them,
    that inevitably
    pulls me down
    from my ladder,
    and through the
    gullet of
    this
    serpent
    I
    plunge.
     
  2. citrus_seas

    citrus_seas Senior Member

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    don't know, man...sounds kinda rappish... can't stand stand rap...it ruined music. but if i DID like rap, or hip-hop, or whatever the hell it's called, i'd think it's pretty cool
     
  3. monarch

    monarch Member

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    its not rap lol, i despise rap >_<
    its just the format, to illustrate the swirling motion and final fall into the hole.
     

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