have you ever felt like leaving?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dreamergirl, Jan 6, 2005.

  1. dreamergirl

    dreamergirl Member

    have you ever felt like leaving?
    packing up a bag and walking out the door?

    step out into the cold winter air,
    with no place in mind but the heat of time

    walk down january's bitter roads
    and close your eyes with dreams of the warm breeze of a distant land

    let the dry air of the desert coat your skin
    and the bright sun bring out the love in your heart

    do these images wrap your mind in bliss,
    as they do mine?

    does your heart lust to be freed;
    to roam around without obligation?

    i'll pack my bag and walk out the door...
  2. NeoPascal

    NeoPascal Member

  3. Always and forever.
  4. LandLoper

    LandLoper Member

    i liked ur song... got realated
    because i do feel like that
    and i am doin it
    thank u for ur song

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