Haiku 5-7-5

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by 8eyedspy, Feb 1, 2007.

  1. hippy i am

    hippy i am poppy seed bagels

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    i forgot to put the word 'like' in front of green tomatoes, lol.
     
  2. Justagrrl420

    Justagrrl420 Member

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    when they are deep fried,
    and I'm not too fried.
    It's funny to laugh at everything.
     
  3. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    When they are deep fried
    the taste really blows my mind
    Just add vinegar
     
  4. Dejavu

    Dejavu Until the great unbanning

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    just add vinegar
    to a cut on your finger
    ask your parents first
     
  5. Malapascua

    Malapascua Member

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    Ask your parents first
    If you can stay out all night
    They might say NO WAY
     
  6. Dejavu

    Dejavu Until the great unbanning

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    They might say no way
    With no time for me and mine
    High time for my way.
     
  7. hippy i am

    hippy i am poppy seed bagels

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    high time for my way
    indescribable feelings
    listening to The Dead
     
  8. Dejavu

    Dejavu Until the great unbanning

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    Listen to the dead
    Timelessness told but not wed
    It alone life won't shed.
     
  9. hippy i am

    hippy i am poppy seed bagels

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    alone, life won't shed
    searching is necessary
    always feed your soul
     
  10. Dejavu

    Dejavu Until the great unbanning

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    (Thanks for fixing me hippy i am :D)

    Always feed your soul
    And let it be drunken too
    Not just on haiku
     
  11. SvgGrdnBeauty

    SvgGrdnBeauty only connect

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    not just on haiku
    should our hearts pour forth sweet words
    also in each breath
     
  12. hippy i am

    hippy i am poppy seed bagels

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    ahh it's all good dejavu, :D
    i was confused and the like, lol..

    also in each breath
    our lungs become filled with air
    sometimes ciggarettes
     
  13. Dejavu

    Dejavu Until the great unbanning

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    Sometimes cigarettes
    remind one of better smokes
    don't bogart that joint
     
  14. hippy i am

    hippy i am poppy seed bagels

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    don't bogart that joint
    pass it over to my way
    puff, puff, cough, cough, pass
     
  15. 8eyedspy

    8eyedspy Member

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    puff, puff, cough, cough, pass

    burnt beyond recognition

    another stoner
     
  16. Dejavu

    Dejavu Until the great unbanning

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    Another stoner
    takes aim and joins in pelting
    one who will not beg
     
  17. Sirius

    Sirius Member

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    one who will not beg
    just pass me the joint okay
    I want to be high
     
  18. Dejavu

    Dejavu Until the great unbanning

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    I want to be high

    for the sake of the highest
    to dive into chance
     
  19. hippyman

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    To dive into chance
    Take the plunge into darkness
    How can we survive
     
  20. hippy i am

    hippy i am poppy seed bagels

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    how can we survive
    on this island of darkness?
    play the grateful dead
     

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