This is one of the things I love the most about John's writing too. I always tell him that I love the way he describes things. It can be very simple things, like Brooke pulling her underwear up after peeing, but the choice of words paints a perfect picture in my mind.
your myspace is where I originally read them. I see the new one you just put up. I think I'll refresh the story in my head and read all of the previous ones again first though.
has he taken any classes on creative writing? it seems like he has. that is one of the first things they will tell you. use specificity, and lots of detail. by including things that at first seem like they dont really matter, you can more adequately develop a character, sort of on a subconscious level. showing rather than telling is always a better way to develop the story. it makes it seem more real.
Im a voluptuous supermodel heighted woman Im looking for a job I just moved out Worked at a greenhouse previously Sexy accent
That's pretty funny. OK, nobody got my last one. A granite 6pack, living with the wonderful wizard, and hangs with the pervs in Love and Sex mainly.
Nah, XD actually I dropped out of school. I think that's why my writing never gets done haha, my concentration with writing is nothing like my concentration with music. I get too dreamy and lost in my own writing and forget unplug from the writing God
well, if you ever decide to go back or something, I think you would excel at writing man. I'm in the mood to upload some of the random junk that feel out of my head now.