From Pen, To Computer, To Head?

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  1. GeorgeCarlinFan

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    I'm an author, but lately, my conscience has gotten out of control.

    I could be watching anything, and my imagination will takeover. In the past, I'd write the ideas down. But part of writing is that fantasy, but after backfiring, knowing none of my goals/fantasies came to fruition. So, I guess I can't control it, so might as well not bother to write about it.

    For "Dialogue", I would talk it out. I remember one instance where it felt fake, but it wasn't my writing, it was my "acting".



    Chicago - Dialogue

    Robert Lamm wrote it, but in this conversation, you have Terry Kath and Peter Cetera singing it. Great stuff. With each voice representing a different perspective. Remember, this was back when the US had an anti-war movement.

    Are you optimistic
    'Bout the way things are going?
    No, I never ever think of it at all
    Don't you ever worry
    When you see what's going down?
    Well, I try to mind my business,
    That is, no business at all
    When it's time to function
    As a feeling human being, will your
    Bachelor of Arts help you get by?
    I hope to study further,
    A few more years or so. I also hope
    To keep a steady high
    Will you try to change
    Things, use the power that you have,
    The power of a million new ideas?
    What is this power you
    Speak of and this need for things to
    Change? I always thought
    That everything was fine, everything
    Is fine
    Don't you feel repression just
    Closing in around?
    No, the campus here is very, very free
    Don't it make you angry
    The way war is dragging on?
    Peter
    Well, I hope the President
    Knows what he's into, I don't know.
    Oh, I just don't know
    Terry
    Don't you ever see the starvation
    In the city where you live, all the
    Needless hunger all the
    Needless pain?

    I haven't been there lately,
    The country is so fine, but my
    Neighbors don't seem hungry 'cause
    They haven't got the time, haven't got
    The time

    Thank you for the talk,
    You know you really eased my mind.
    I was troubled by the shapes
    Of things to come.

    Well, if you had my Outlook
    your feelings would be Numb,
    you'd always think
    That everything was fine,
    Everything was fine.



    We can make it better
    We can make it better
    We can make it better
    Yeah, yeah, yeah
    We can change the world now
     

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