Discussion in 'Poetry' started by peacefulrevolution, May 24, 2007.

  1. Do you really love me?

    I'm sitting in despair

    Dying from your oppression

    And I don't think you care

    yeah i wrote this the other night after i got in a fight with my dad.

    i want him to understand, but he's such a square.
  2. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

    Short, but obviously very meaningful. I like it. =]
  3. weve all been there bro. this is probly the only poem ive seen get away with such small description and small amount of...words and still be good.
    word my man

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