Epiphany

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Icurus, Aug 20, 2005.

  1. Icurus

    Icurus Member

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    Is life over when day and night no longer matter,
    a flock of birds in an instant, with one shot they scatter,
    same routine, that with age has caught up with those
    who noticed, those to busy to have realized still feel
    to breathe,
    I have gathered to me an alliance with silence,
    I know every stitch in my five hundred dollar rug,
    I know the season that rapidly passes,
    surely there must be more for me to accomplish,
    why must everything be hidden?, to give it more zeal when found,
    or maybe I've missed the point all together,
    and all had nothing to do with the seasons, or the weather....

    Good moment to all,
    D ~
     
  2. TreeFiddy

    TreeFiddy Member

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    incredible, i loved it. the height of zen
     
  3. Icurus

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    Thanks Tree/F,
    for your time to read and reply..
    Peace,
    Devon K. ~
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I like it. The uncertainty adds to the beauty of it; it's not only honest, but it says how such truth is in a way beyond our understanding. but maybe understanding is not the important thing, eh? Good shit man, keep posting :)
     
  5. natural23

    natural23 Senior Member

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    To me this writing is beautiful; silently, steadily, filled with enlightened prayers.







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  6. Icurus

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    Thank all for your time to read, and reply,
    Peace,
    Devon K. ~
     

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