Do You Haiku?

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Deidre, Sep 11, 2017.

  1. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

    haha But, it works, so you're good. :blush:
     
  2. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Supporters Lifetime Supporter HipForums Supporter

    My head is pounding
    My nose doesn't stop running
    My chest is aching
     
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  3. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

    I'm sorry to read this :(
    I hope you get better soon
    Sending you a hug
     
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  4. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Supporters Lifetime Supporter HipForums Supporter

    Thank you so much D
    I am feeling way better
    Got eats and sleep too.
     
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  5. lion1978

    lion1978 Member

    Are you sure you didn't missmell that isn't it supposed to say "Dog eats and sleep too" ?
     
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  6. Pete's Draggin'

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    The large mass is out
    Here we go to the next bout
    Life is worth the fight
     
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  7. Pete's Draggin'

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    Winning a metal
    Is not always a talent
    It is in the heart.
     
  8. fundoo

    fundoo Member

    Almost embarrassed
    I was for thought "everyday"
    Was three and/ or four

    Except now am I
    For admitting to this truth
    Now hide, poster's block

    Hehe ;)

    Believe it or not
    I'm not always this clever
    To write stuff like this

    But overcomes mood
    Which creative mind emerge
    And brings forth this word

    Oh man, I still can't
    Feel confidence completely
    So please, just stop me!

    Hahaha :tearsofjoy::tearsofjoy::hearteyes:
     
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  9. Pete's Draggin'

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    Confidence is You
    Gold metal writing Haikus
    Pete bows to Fundoo
     
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  10. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Supporters Lifetime Supporter HipForums Supporter

    I met him Friday
    He has read my dossier
    He's my nemesis

    This sup is quackers
    He's tossing everything out
    What is next to go

    He is just starting
    He is just about warmed up
    Where will this all go

    Now it is just walls
    Kinda like Rikers Island
    Just missing the bars

    Broken detectors
    Guards positioned at both posts
    Barbed wire fence outside
     
  11. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Supporters Lifetime Supporter HipForums Supporter

    Always love to say......
    You are my sweetest candy
    On Valentine's day.

    Reese's peanut girl.
    Kit Kat wafer squeeze
    My Hershey's Bar tease

    I just love to please
    That's why you will always be
    My little sweet pea
     
  12. fundoo

    fundoo Member

    You sure you've never
    Done this? You're a natural
    A real great talent!

    (Not sure where that came from. Here's what I originally brought to the table on this normal/typical type day)

    Boring, dull, dumb, blah
    Can't think, be creative, SHIT!
    Really hard to do!

    :p
     
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  13. Pete's Draggin'

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    I thank you fundoo
    For all of your nice comments
    I owe one person

    D unlocked my brain
    The faucet can't be turned off
    I love writing these
     
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  14. Pete's Draggin'

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    She is my snowflake
    No two are ever alike
    There is only one

    I cannot stop it
    As the ice melts in my hand
    I will say goodbye
     
  15. Total Darkness

    Total Darkness 100% Cocoa

    Penetrating eyes
    Nothing comes as a surprise
    Seeing threw the lies
     
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