Do You Haiku?

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  1. DrRainbow

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    oh
     
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  2. Tulsa

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    I touched her soft hand
    and felt her soul, deep in grief
    we cried together.
     
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  3. Tulsa

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    I Am

    I don’t know from whence I came,
    nor how this Universe began.
    I care not play the guessing game,
    pretending wiser than, I am.

    Some theorize it’s all just fate,
    while others a divine plan.
    But I am not convinced, at date,
    that either way will stand.

    I can’t say whether I’m heaven sent,
    or a peg on the wheel of doom.
    But I am certainly not an accident,
    Nor will I live a life of gloom.
     
  4. Dianne with 2 nn's

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    Spank my ass hard
    Passionate submissive joy
    Makes me cum for you
     
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  5. Moon Goddess

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    Nice but you are missing a syllable in the first line for a Haiku
     
  6. Dianne with 2 nn's

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    I suck at poetry.:(
     
  7. Moon Goddess

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    No you don't, you just have to count the syllables more carefully.

    Try "You spank my ass hard" or "Spank my ass real hard" and it is good to go. :)
     
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    No! Loved it!!
     
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    Peace was found today
    Discovering how we play
    Thumbs can make magic
     
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    True love found and lost
    Afraid his life would never change
    Gone without a word
     
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    South winds fill my sail
    Sunset lights the way ahead
    Splashes tap and swirl
     
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  12. Pepper!

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    That last one was for you Sailor 69
     
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    Thank you! Loved it!!
     
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    Adventurous heart
    Eyes glistening and careful
    Beauty in and out
     
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    With you I want to
    Ride off into the sunset
    You and only you
     
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    My heart beats in time
    To the rhythm and the rhyme
    Of our souls entwined
     
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    My try…

    Wave great, small
    Strong and mesmerizing
    with the sense of excitement
     
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  18. Pepper!

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    Hearts under the stars
    Senses wake by river’s breeze
    Lips meet, all else fades
     
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    Wandering freely
    In the city of writers
    Quiet Liffey flows
     
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    Spring brings writer’s block
    Preoccupation prevails
    A new life in bloom

    …for the Moon Goddess…
     
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