Do You Haiku?

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Deidre, Sep 11, 2017.

  1. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

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    Close?...Close to what Pete?
    Its close.... to post eight hundred

    Well.....I just stole it! :)
     
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  2. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    I LOVE MISS DEIDRE
    SHE REALLY IS A SWEETIE
    BIG HUGS ALL AROUND

    :kissingclosed::hearteyes:
     
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  3. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Is it sad that I counted the syllables to make sure it’s in proper haiku form? :grimacing:
    :tearsofjoy:

    Hope you’re doing well and TY for this.
     
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  4. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    I know my haikus
    five-seven-five, my dear D
    I love you always

    It's OK to check! I double check every one I write here! Take care! (xoxo) :hearteyes:

    [Still staying with the friend...over two months now.]
     
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  5. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    i do check mine too
    and everybody elses
    it's automatic

    : )
     
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  6. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    A vengeful phantom
    And a spiteful witch found love
    Halloween is near. . .
     
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  7. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    New Britain baseball
    Thirty-six years is now done
    Time to buzz off, Bees

    :disappointed:
     
  8. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    It is fucking cold
    Who let January in?
    Can I have heat back?

    :(
     
  9. YouFreeMe

    YouFreeMe Visitor

    That weak winter light
    Filtering through old windows
    And I feel the cold

    Seeping through the glass
    The yellowing paint that peels
    Revealing pine sills

    From trees long town down
    Carved by now-skeletal hands;
    Of carpenters, dead

    Their work--well preserved
    Their names, their lives, forgotten
    Buried in chipped paint

    In an old brick house
    Where each stone, each pane of glass
    Hides someone's story
     
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  10. YouFreeMe

    YouFreeMe Visitor

    Cruelest November
    The month where summer's warm touch
    Turns to memory
     
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  11. HashtagInterested

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    Memory awake
    to find a new birth and then
    onward to the next
     
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  12. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Finding your self worth
    is a long and winding road
    Never let it go
     
  13. DrRainbow

    DrRainbow Ambassador of Love

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    You're emotion is a choice.
    Go over and over the good times.
    Do not record the bad times.
     
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  14. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    Getting some tests soon
    First eyes and then all the rest
    Fearing those needles!

    :(
     
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  15. HashtagInterested

    HashtagInterested Members

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    Would this be considered a quadruple Haiku?


    Needles and pins and
    a leg sleeping again when
    balance is off friend.

    I can't stand it then
    I cant stand the needles and
    pins in my leg when

    my leg is sleeping ...
    Those damn needles and pins can
    keep you down my friend

    so don't let them man
    don't let the needles and pins
    keep you down my friend.
     
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  16. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    Rain to snow for me
    I fucking hate November
    Wont walking be fun
    :(
     
  17. HashtagInterested

    HashtagInterested Members

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    Fun? I don't think so
    not for me anyway, but ...
    some do like walking
     
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  18. HashtagInterested

    HashtagInterested Members

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    I may too if the
    seasons are like butterfly
    kisses and a beer
     
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  19. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    Three inches of rain
    Melted snow is included
    Please make this shit stop!
     
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  20. HashtagInterested

    HashtagInterested Members

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    Please make this shit stop
    A better life awaits all
    It's what we make it
     
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