Do You Haiku?

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Deidre, Sep 11, 2017.

  1. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    I saw the bacon
    So I took seven hundred
    I ate the bacon
     
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  2. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    This thread is still here
    Can't think of a good haiku
    Try again later
     
  3. wooleeheron

    wooleeheron Brain Damaged Lifetime Supporter

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    We go round in a circle and suppose,
    While the secret sits in the middle and Knows!
    For everywhere you go in a singularity,
    There you are!
     
  4. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Here we go again
    Wool's hiaku's are dizzying
    I just don't get it
     
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  5. parua

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    When all falls silent
    Don't announce it with a thought
    I'll just close my eyes
     
  6. wooleeheron

    wooleeheron Brain Damaged Lifetime Supporter

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    All mimsey were the Ort Clouds,
    Dancing delightfully between invisible moonbeams,
    By the light of Jupiter's moons,
    Did the borogroves all congregate!
     
  7. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    i am unable
    to understand your reasons
    bewildering bull
     
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  8. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    capering outside
    you couldn't ever forget
    that the sky was there
     
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  9. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    i would like to swim
    right off the ground, through the air
    they call that flying
     
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  10. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    when tea is so hot
    drinking it almost burns me
    it is an anchor
     
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  11. parua

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    One day only to feel.
    Everything else put aside.
    You can have the rest
     
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  12. Driftrue

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    weeding and crying
    nettle stings on both my hands
    the garden is safe
     
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  13. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Sunshine peeking out
    But, dark clouds looming about
    Good day for a nap
     
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  14. parua

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    Golden, bright yellow
    The meadow is peaceful
    Toward the sunset
     
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  15. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    Far from home, we are
    It is a feeling inside
    Not sad, but longing
     
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  16. YouFreeMe

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    Bare toes, wiggling
    In the stream's cold muddy bank
    A brief oasis
     
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  17. YouFreeMe

    YouFreeMe Visitor

    In thick humid air
    Dark grey blue electric clouds
    Glide across the sky
     
  18. Total Darkness

    Total Darkness 100% Cocoa

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    Thinking and dreaming
    Exploring inward and out
    Life of a loner
     
  19. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    trying not to do
    the worst thing, but the one thing
    my whole self screams for
     
  20. parua

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    What is "the worst thing" of your poem?
     

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