Do You Haiku?

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  1. Irminsul

    Irminsul Valkyrie

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    We should call them "Whac-koo" :sweatsmile:
     
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  2. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    I want to ride my
    Bicycle i want to ride
    It where i li-iiike

    (It works if you draw out like into 2 syllables)
     
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  3. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    :sweatsmile: Perfect!
     
  4. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Soaring high above
    In the moment, I forget
    My fear of flying
     
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  5. Aerianne

    Aerianne Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    Sneezing and blowing
    How I hate this stupid cold
    I should take a pill
     
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  6. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    ((feel better))
     
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  7. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Hugs are so silent
    Without anything to say
    Hugs can say so much
     
  8. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    A lone bird flies by
    Wonder where he is off to?
    Faster than the wind
     
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  9. YouFreeMe

    YouFreeMe Visitor

    Mind is full, buzzing
    Sizzling, snapping like hot oil
    Dancing in a pan.
     
  10. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    What should I do, now?
    Trying to find the answers
    That you simply knew
     
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  11. Libbygrable87

    Libbygrable87 Members

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    Roses sat on the road
    He lay them for her
    Trying to show her love
     
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  12. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    A day like today
    Is different than yesterday
    Never to return

    *not sure if different is two or three syllables hmm
     
  13. Libbygrable87

    Libbygrable87 Members

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    You look at me
    As I look at you
    Then we kiss
     
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  14. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    I say three, but it's commonly pronounced badly. It's a nice haiku so we'll say diff-rent : )

    Chocolate and policeman are similar..
     
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  15. WOLF ANGEL

    WOLF ANGEL Senior Member - A Fool on the Hill Lifetime Supporter

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    It seemed a good plan
    Travel away and afar
    But things just did not work out
     
  16. Libbygrable87

    Libbygrable87 Members

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    The rain fall down
    The wind followed by
    I stood wet
     
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  17. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Tend to agree - diff- er- ent
     
  18. Libbygrable87

    Libbygrable87 Members

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    She let go of fear
    The Fear she was holding
    It went away never to return
     
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  19. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    It happens quickly
    Before you know it, you're gone
    And, heaven is near
     
  20. Libbygrable87

    Libbygrable87 Members

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    You pay the price
    Nothing is for free
    Everything has a cost
     
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