Do You Haiku?

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Deidre, Sep 11, 2017.

  1. newbie-one

    newbie-one one with the newbiverse

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    Sounds like there's a story behind that one, among others
     
  2. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Yea, a friend of mine was cheated on, and my advice was to move on. Of course, easier said than done. :/
     
  3. newbie-one

    newbie-one one with the newbiverse

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    Sometimes advice is not the thing that someone needs most (says me as I give you advice)

    Expressing the sentiments in your haiku to your friend might be more valuable. Just so your friend knows you wish you could take the pain away. Maybe spend some time with them.
     
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  4. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    True. You are a wise one, newbie one. That tends to be my advice in general when feeling wronged-just delete the person from your life. I know that it isn’t always that easy.
     
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  5. newbie-one

    newbie-one one with the newbiverse

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    new threads
    clicking on one
    butt cheeks
     
  6. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    perpetually
    unfolding understanding
    of the perfection
     
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  7. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    The ice falls like shards
    Of glass, like sharp bells outside
    My window today
     
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  8. McFuddy

    McFuddy Visitor

    If, indeed this is
    The will of the council, then
    Fudds will see it done
     
  9. McFuddy

    McFuddy Visitor

    Good to know that Drift
    Has been thinking about me
    Good contemplation
     
  10. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    That's right, McFuddy
    All of us, even you, are
    part of perfection
     
  11. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    I have haiku block
    My mind is totally blank
    Need inspiration :oops:
     
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  12. Running Horse

    Running Horse A Buddha in hiding from himself

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    An empty mind is
    The beginning of a full
    Satisfied stomach
     
  13. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Deck the halls with boughs
    of holly, fa la la
    la la la la la

    Yay, it worked.
     
  14. Driftrue

    Driftrue Banned

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    We sometimes think that
    others hold the key to our
    happiness; they don't.
     
  15. YouFreeMe

    YouFreeMe Visitor

    Curling wisps of smoke
    Swirl around me like tendrils
    An empty caress.
     
  16. A dead koala
    Gazed upon the starry sky
    And guessed correctly
     
  17. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Roses are red, Vi
    olets are blue, don’t think this
    Counts as a haiku
     
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  18. bft4evr

    bft4evr Senior Member

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    A haiku its not
    its not even close
    its a quick little poem
    of that you can boast
     
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  19. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Ohhh okay :oops:
     
  20. bft4evr

    bft4evr Senior Member

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    Okay she says
    to my little rhyme
    I hope she's not mad
    at me this time
     
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