Do You Haiku?

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Deidre, Sep 11, 2017.

  1. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Rings of the tree trunk.
    Will be a symbol of love.
    As we rest as one.
     
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  2. YouFreeMe

    YouFreeMe Visitor

    Three in the morning
    The twilight of consciousness
    A liminal space
     
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  3. YouFreeMe

    YouFreeMe Visitor

    Humid air clinging
    Icing trees with silver dew
    Droplets glittering
     
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  4. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Finding out some news
    New culture, new food, new mood
    Life is full of change
     
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  5. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Her birthday is near
    Shall I play as the husband
    Or be her lover

    Card and cake are good
    I will put some cake on her
    Eating will be fun

    I have much to say
    The card will read from my heart
    Expressions of love

    It will be her day
    Anything she wants to do
    Maybe she does me.

    I've come a long way
    Boyfriend husband caregiver
    I will keep going
     
  6. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Loc-Nar, that's beautiful! Love it so much <3
     
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  7. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    You can call me Pete
    Loc nar is a character
    It's nice to meet you
     
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  8. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Counting the hours
    Until I'm home with my love
    Can't wait to see him
     
  9. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Life seems to fly by
    You find love in one person
    Your life was well spent
     
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  10. fjdreams

    fjdreams count chocula

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    Undulating waves
    In my stomach as I wait
    For her to respond
     
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  11. The Walking Dickhead

    The Walking Dickhead orbiter of helion

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    I find Haiku
    A little restrctive in it's
    Overall construct

    That said, I'm not sure
    What the correct way to say
    Haiku is
     
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  12. Total Darkness

    Total Darkness 100% Cocoa

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    roaming through the forums
    everyone stuck on repeat
    you all are boring :p


    ignore my humor
    not meant to be offensive
    how silly of me
     
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  13. The Walking Dickhead

    The Walking Dickhead orbiter of helion

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    I've got a new bike
    It's not really a new bike
    Got my old bike fixed
     
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  14. Total Darkness

    Total Darkness 100% Cocoa

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    Dream beautiful dreams
    Overcome the fear within
    Learn much from failure
     
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  15. fjdreams

    fjdreams count chocula

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    well well well looks like
    someone has decided to
    join the haiku fun
     
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  16. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Why can't I "dislike" this? :p
     
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  17. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Sounds like you're in loooove :-}
     
  18. fjdreams

    fjdreams count chocula

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    Yeah but I'm in the doghouse bigtime
     
  19. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    @ DEIDRE:

    Thought about Philly
    Four O'clock wake up no good
    F--- it! Back to bed!

    :sleeping:?
     
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  20. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Aw sorry!! :blush5:
     

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