Do You Haiku?

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  1. EloiseAtThePlaza

    EloiseAtThePlaza Visitor

    No inspiration for Luke
     
    EloiseAtThePlaza, Aug 27, 2018
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  3. Born25YearsTooLate

    Born25YearsTooLate Hunting the mighty whifflesnark

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    Grumpy cat says No!
    Haiku is not for me now
    I eat cheese instead.
     
    Born25YearsTooLate, Aug 27, 2018
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  5. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    Could be worse

    Matthew, Todd, Luke, John
     
    Meliai, Aug 27, 2018
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  7. Born25YearsTooLate

    Born25YearsTooLate Hunting the mighty whifflesnark

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    (liverpool accent) what about ringo? that's a silly name andall, innit?
     
    Born25YearsTooLate, Aug 27, 2018
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  9. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    Oh that bloody Ringo!
     
    Meliai, Aug 27, 2018
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  11. guerillabedlam

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    The soothing night breeze
    My mind is in reverie
    Adventure beckons
     
    guerillabedlam, Aug 28, 2018
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  13. guerillabedlam

    guerillabedlam _|=|-|=|_

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    ouch
     
    guerillabedlam, Aug 28, 2018
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  15. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    It's so nice read
    That some things never do change
    So sayeth the flock
     
    Pete's Draggin', Aug 28, 2018
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  17. Born25YearsTooLate

    Born25YearsTooLate Hunting the mighty whifflesnark

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    awake, sleepless nights
    thinking of someone far off
    two hearts in the dark
     
    Born25YearsTooLate, Aug 28, 2018
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  19. Born25YearsTooLate

    Born25YearsTooLate Hunting the mighty whifflesnark

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    naked flesh, burning
    lust, heat, breath, passion rising...
    quiet morning light
     
    Born25YearsTooLate, Aug 28, 2018
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  21. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Do you see the light
    Jake says, yes I see the light.
    Elwood says , what light
     
    Pete's Draggin', Aug 28, 2018
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  23. WOLF ANGEL

    WOLF ANGEL Senior Member - A Fool on the Hill Lifetime Supporter

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    In the dark I feel
    Hidden shadow mist of death
    And beyond, new life.
     
    WOLF ANGEL, Aug 28, 2018
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  25. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Time to make a change
    Moving on isn’t easy
    But, necessary
     
    Deidre, Aug 28, 2018
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  27. Ged

    Ged Tits and Thigh Man.

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    Hip Forums needs a lovebomb
    Such a delicate work of art priceless!
    Why don't more people subscribe?
     
    Ged, Aug 28, 2018
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  29. Ged

    Ged Tits and Thigh Man.

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    Poor little Hip Forums Oh!
    What she gone done now?
    Forgiveness is not a sin.

    (Sorry I'm not counting the syllables. Is ancient Chinese man not happy?)
     
    Ged, Aug 28, 2018
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  31. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Too many syllables but it’s all good ;)
     
    Deidre, Aug 28, 2018
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  33. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    My hopes, they are high
    I should keep them small, but alas
    I still want it all

    (Plagiarized some of this from a song) :oops:
     
    Deidre, Aug 29, 2018
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  35. Born25YearsTooLate

    Born25YearsTooLate Hunting the mighty whifflesnark

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    google haiku syllable counter
     
    Born25YearsTooLate, Aug 29, 2018
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  37. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Oh crap, I went over on the second line. Dang it. :weary:
     
    Deidre, Aug 29, 2018
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  39. EloiseAtThePlaza

    EloiseAtThePlaza Visitor

    Too many syllables but it’s all good ;)
     
    EloiseAtThePlaza, Aug 29, 2018
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