Do You Haiku?

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Deidre, Sep 11, 2017.

  1. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Its post four hundred
    I have a good pace going
    Still way more to come.
     
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  2. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    A pace in the race
    but to where
    and where from
     
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  3. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    Haiku I do not do
    Rythem I do not do
    of rhymes I have again no clue
    Instead I write theese few words from me to you
     
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  4. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Always mis spelling
    It would not have surprised me
    If you would spell write
     
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  5. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    My fear of Hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliophobia
    Makes me use these short words, yet I must misspell
    If not I did miss pell then when and by whom
    If I did not miss pell then she might be forgotten
     
  6. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    Was I a poet I’d write all night long
    Was I a singer I’d sing you a song

    But any of these I am not
    My words are humble
    My voice is hoarse
    I am merely a Lion
     
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  7. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    A little nervous
    Monday is coming so fast
    Must find the right words :grimacing:
     
  8. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    I quit my job and
    after two weeks from monday
    I am free at last

    Perhaps you could turn your notice in Haiku form?
     
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  9. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    lol I should. :sob:At least it would be succinct.

    Congrats!! The job where you can bring your dog?
     
  10. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    haha I was just
    writing that for you Deidre,
    to give to your boss.

    (No new job for me yet but a second interview with the dog place on Thursday and a first interview with someone else, also on Thursday. I didnt feel like explaining that in Haiku lol)
     
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  11. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    lol ah, I didn't catch that :oops: :p

    Good luck to you, Mel.
    The grass might just be greener
    You will soon find out <3
     
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  12. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    On and on it goes
    Where it may stop, no one knows
    Not original :oops:
     
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  13. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    My brain, a city after bombardment
    My thoughts, scattered all around
    My sanity, gone with the smoke,
    My soul, burried in the earth
     
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  14. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    Lost inside my mind,
    The walls keep closing in,
    I close my eyes and drift away to a place I do not know,
    in the end even my shadow was to heavy for me to bare.
     
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  15. lion1978

    lion1978 The King

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    There is no room in here
    there is no air
    the darkness overwhelms me as I face my fear

    I can not see
    I can not talk
    I am trapped and I am lost.
     
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  16. YogaBird

    YogaBird Believe on the Lord Jesus Christ

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    Wake up to the sun
    Feeling the warmth on my skin
    My perfect solace
     
  17. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    A bird on my head
    Loui Jover, who are you?
    This wine tastes so good
     
  18. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Um, okay, I was buzzed when I posted that haiku, earlier ^^

    :anguished::relaxed:
     
  19. newbie-one

    newbie-one one with the newbiverse

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    Leaving now
    No regrets
    Here's the bird
     
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  20. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    3,3,3?

    Very, very unorthodox form, newbs
     
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