Do You Haiku?

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Deidre, Sep 11, 2017.

  1. GLENGLEN

    GLENGLEN Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

    ^^^... WOW.....I'm Totally Lost For Words......:expressionless:



    Cheers Glen.
     
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  2. Mountain Valley Wolf

    Mountain Valley Wolf Senior Member

    赤人の女

    婆爺泣くに
    子食わずに
    泣くに泣く

    Akajin no onna

    Baba jiji naku ni
    Ko kuwazu ni
    Naku ni naku


    NATIVE WOMAN

    grandpa grandma cry, and
    A child goes hungry
    And cries and cries

    Today is the Wear Red Day to honor all the Native Women that are disappearing. This is a serious problem happening in Native communities right now. Mothers, daughters, sisters are disappearing at an alarming rate from the reservations and Native communities.
     
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  3. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

  4. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    The stay with me song
    Hannah Trigwell was awesome
    Way better than Sam
     
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  5. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    That song that SONG sung
    Best Youtube I saw all day
    It was oh so cool
     
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  6. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

    Overwhelmed, I feel
    Just filled with sadness today
    Where can I fly to?
     
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  7. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    I liked your haiku
    I don't like that you are sad
    Hope you feel better
     
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  8. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    Grass is way too long
    It's going to take some time
    It will look great though
     
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  9. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    I'm a loss for words
    Sometimes things cant be explained
    It's above us all.
     
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  10. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    The chat room is fun
    It's getting more popular
    Need Eric! to join
     
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  11. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

    Feeling out of place
    Cliques seem to be everywhere
    Maybe time to go
     
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  12. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    That is crazy D
    I just dont know what you mean?
    Just dont up and leave
     
  13. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    Send me a message
    Send me a message
    Things dont have to be this way
    I will help you out
     
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  14. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

    It’s ok, no worries. Thank you, though.
     
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  15. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    Something is up D
    You are part of the family
    I can tell your down
     
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  16. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

    Thank you, Pete...you’re sweet
    I can’t explain it really
    It’s just a feeling :/
     
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  17. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    A feeling with hip?
    I know you can explain it
    You are so well versed
     
  18. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    The way you write things
    How you can express yourself
    The blog that you write
     
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  19. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    It's one of those days
    This is an easy fix D
    Just give it a try



    Please....
     
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  20. lion1978

    lion1978 Member

    with Pete I agree
    Leave not dear D
    For you will be missed by many
    we all need ypu here
     
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