Do You Haiku?

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Deidre, Sep 11, 2017.

  1. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Its post three hundred
    I just left the starting gate
    Alot more to come.
     
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  2. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    The birds are happy
    The coyotes are happy
    The squirrels are happy
     
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  3. YouFreeMe

    YouFreeMe Visitor

    Warm kisses in the
    Clear starry nights of springtime;
    New flowers are born
     
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  4. YouFreeMe

    YouFreeMe Visitor

    The ocean sparkles
    With brightness liked chipped diamonds
    While salt air erodes
     
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  5. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    How did we get here?
    Starts with hurtful words, then moves
    There is no excuse
     
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  6. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    It is very sad
    It starts with the letter M
    It can still be fixed
     
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  7. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Let the dust settle
    Emotions are high right now
    We will get past this
     
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  8. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    People are pushing
    People are getting knocked down
    People are shouting
     
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  9. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Your haikus are always on point, Pete :)
     
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  10. Pete's Draggin'

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    It's very dark out
    It's hard to see through the fog
    The damn fog of war
     
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  11. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    My hands are both tied
    There will be a staff meeting
    Your hands are tied too
     
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  12. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Just hug your loved one
    Let the sunrise tommorow
    Things will be different
     
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  13. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    The bright sun is out.
    The wind still makes me feel cold.
    No clouds in the sky.
     
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  14. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    It's nice to see change
    Bad ideas are shifted out
    New beginnings, now
     
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  15. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Once upon a time
    In a land far, far away
    Wait, this story’s been done :oops:
     
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  16. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Looking at old posts
    I agree with You Free Me
    What was i thinking
     
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  17. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Just love the waiting
    Hoping the scan comes back clean
    Won't know til Monday
     
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  18. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    Life is always cruel
    Just have to find the goodness
    Get rid of badness
     
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  19. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    I believe in You, now.
    I know that You’re here for me
    Peace and joy will be
     
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  20. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    There was a river
    One handed boy would eat lunch
    He would eat alone

    Alone he would eat.
    He liked the peace and quiet.
    One day that all changed.

    Two squirrels sat in love
    The boy liked the company
    The squirrels were not scared

    The boy shared his food
    He enjoyed sharing his lunch
    Something was off though

    The big squirrel was strong
    The small squirrel was weak and slow
    It looked very frail

    As he placed the food
    The big squirrel would pass it on
    So the small could eat

    It could barely eat
    It was just hair skin and bones
    All its strength was gone

    The very next day
    On the way to the river
    The boy saw something

    He saw the two squirrels
    They were both on the dirt trail
    Something was wrong though

    The strong squirrel stood there
    The small squirrel was not moving
    It was not breathing

    The boy kneeling down
    Dug a hole with his one hand
    Gently placed inside

    Covered with warm earth
    The big strong squirrel would not move
    The boy walked away

    It was the next day
    The boy ate his lunch alone
    Something caught his eye

    Just in front of him
    In the water by the rocks
    It was the strong squirrel

    It was not moving
    It was not breathing either
    It passed on some how

    The boy felt the grief
    He walked to the trail of tears
    Dug another hole

    Next to the first one
    So they could be together
    They were always one
     
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