Do You Haiku?

Discussion in 'Writers Forum' started by Deidre, Sep 11, 2017.

  1. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    When we part our ways
    Black bird flys to tell the cloak
    Decision is made

    Always on my mind
    Looking over my shoulder
    Can't see but he's there

    The clock keeps ticking
    The hands never stop moving
    My life is fading
     
  2. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    Want a friday fix?
    Just watch the Casino flick
    Don't lose all your chips
     
  3. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    You push me out, why?
    You pull me back in again
    Love, like the ocean
     
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  4. Moonglow181

    Moonglow181 Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

    That was pretty awesome, Deidre.....

    Here are some haikus that went through my head earlier.....let's see if i can remember them...lol....and I find you pretty sweet, gentle and classy....so anything written here that is opposite of those thoughts are not directed at you in any way....:)

    Ok, first one, inspired by what you just wrote...


    Breathe you in and out
    Some like poison make me ill
    Others restore health

    The magic is gone
    You let others interfere
    and broke connections

    Some want to take joy
    Away from those that have joy
    No joy for themselves

    Some are crass , vulgar
    others sweet, kind, innocent
    I bathe in the sweet.
     
    Last edited: Mar 11, 2018
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  5. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Thank you for saying all of that, that's really nice of you! :blush:
    And I really like these haikus. I like that people are stringing a few haikus together, especially when they all flow well in a row.
     
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  6. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    I see the blue jay
    Is it a male or female
    They both act the same

    I feel like this bird
    Cardinals are mates for life
    I will bring her food

    Like two morning doves
    We are birds of a feather
    Cooing together
     
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  7. Moonglow181

    Moonglow181 Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

    Hi, Pete. Your haikus are excellent, too.
     
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  8. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    Thank you little Moons
    The stars always surround you.
    You are quite the view
     
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  9. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Lightning and thunder
    It seems so noisy outside
    I go back to sleep
     
  10. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    I looked at the stars
    They were all twinkling at me
    Just like some morse code

    I will think of her
    I know which one she will be
    The bright wink at me
     
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  11. Irminsul

    Irminsul Valkyrie

    Haiku! Sounds like something you say before you crack a board with your arm karate style. Or something a street fighter would say before launching their special power. HaiiiiiKUUUUU
     
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  12. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    I have changed that too
    When I sneeze, I say Haiku
    Instead of Ahchoo
     
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  13. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    It is so warm out
    I saw my first fly today
    Spring is almost here
     
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  14. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    The pack is coming
    They are yipping and howling
    I am their next meal
     
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  15. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    The wind is blowing
    A sign that things are coming
    I had to duck twice
     
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  16. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    Get over this slump
    This pathetic little hump
    Suck it up you chump
     
  17. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    Life gets so busy
    Do we know where the time goes?
    Let's pull it back in
     
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  18. Deidre

    Deidre Visitor

    I love you more, now
    Than I did one day ago
    How do you do that?
     
  19. wooleeheron

    wooleeheron Brain Damaged Lifetime Supporter HipForums Supporter

    Breathe Idiot

    Meditate upon the sublime lime Jell-0,
    By the light of Jupiter's moons.
    Blinded by the light,
    Cast adrift in darkest waters.
    Breathe idiot,
    Silence.​
     
    Last edited: Mar 28, 2018
  20. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Draco Dipedibus Staff Member Lifetime Supporter Super Moderator HipForums Supporter

    A troll is coming
    One of the worst kind there is
    Just to hurt others
     

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