devin!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Major Peacenik, Aug 19, 2005.

  1. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    while walking
    home from work
    I stopped at the intersection
    and pressed the 'walk' button

    you were biking
    home from work
    earphones in place
    riding towards the
    intersection
    where I stood
    on the other side
    of the street

    "Devin!" I shouted,
    smiling

    You looked
    I waved
    You waved
    You kept biking.
    What gives?
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    we're all wrapped up in our own little worlds, aren't we? Good poem, makes you think...because even the narrator was in her world, with her expectations....

    deeper than it might appear at first read. Good poem :)
     

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