Dark Warrior

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by freedbypeace, May 16, 2004.

  1. freedbypeace

    freedbypeace A Woman Left Lonely

    A shadow walks through the forrest.
    The surrounding trees and moss carpet stroke the body.
    Eyes are met as he decends
    into a beautiful pool of water,
    darkened by the mid-August sky.
    The eyes are dark, too.
    Gentle warrior
    stunned and strained
    when met by the black tent.
    A cloke of rinestones and a calm breath
    grazes the young man's skin.
    As I walk along the riverside,
    I watch him.
    The dark warrior turns and notices me;
    smiles, and plunges deeper into the river.

    If you enjoyed that, please check out my other work: "Unwanted."
  2. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member


    the next time i'm in the woods, I will keep an eye out for this vision
  3. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

    that was rustically quaint. but that color is hard on the eyes! lol.

    much love :)
  4. Sebbi

    Sebbi Senior Member

    Love it!


  5. freedbypeace

    freedbypeace A Woman Left Lonely

    thanx guys

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