Custard Cat.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by kiwi, May 17, 2007.

  1. kiwi

    kiwi Member

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    The mellow yellow Custard Cat
    sitting on a mushroom mat -
    While the Yellow Weeds turn white,
    and i get up from my down,
    Turn `round,
    and find -
    i've lost my Mind.
    And Summer's Crown is grown from the ground,
    |n green and gold growth.
     
  2. The_Walrus

    The_Walrus Sgt. Pepper

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    I think that's cute.
     
  3. kiwi

    kiwi Member

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    | wrote it while almost falling asleep during my homework.
     
  4. Kether

    Kether Member

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    I'm guessing there's an Alice influence?
     
  5. kiwi

    kiwi Member

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    A little bit. ;]
     
  6. Isil

    Isil Member

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    Heh, thats quite cool xD

    Its good to see a bunch of new people posting poems here :eek:
     
  7. buddm4n

    buddm4n Member

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    how does this shit get responses
     
  8. Isil

    Isil Member

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    Well, you replied to it now didnt you.

    Uh oh!
     
  9. Flowers In My Hair

    Flowers In My Hair Spontaneous Joy

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    I read it. I liked it. And that's how this shit got my response. :)

    More please!
     
  10. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    I love it =]
     
  11. kiwi

    kiwi Member

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    Lmao....
     

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