constellations

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, May 28, 2004.

  1. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

    Messages:
    6,809
    Likes Received:
    3
    Me too. Love mythology... great link, thanks.

    tank top charisma (part vii)

    I loved your choice of the beginning quote:

    "Now, as the son of Resource and Poverty, Love is in a peculiar case. First, he is ever poor, and far from tender or beautiful as most suppose him...
    ~Plato"

    This was my favorite stanza.

    "Take me to Venus, miss charisma,
    your planet of perfumed poisons
    and paralyzing pillow talk
    and purple neon lighting
    commands my counter."

    It was a pleasure to read your new offering.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

    Messages:
    6,809
    Likes Received:
    3
    Stunning, overall. Still have fond memories of this offering.
     
  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

    Messages:
    1,768
    Likes Received:
    1
    "you shall rule all that lives and moves and shall have the greatest rights among the deathless gods: those who defraud you and do not appease your power with offerings, reverently performing rites and paying fit gifts, shall be punished for evermore."
    ~Homer: The Odyssey~

    mercury's platinum virgin

    I must admit, I thought
    no spinster could convert me,
    but when you rolled in,
    I licked my lips, foretasting
    platinum virgin sacrifice.

    a form fitting khaki skirt
    and black leather boots
    laced right up to the knee,
    you held that wheat bouqet
    and I began worshipping
    mercury’s sardonyx rings.

    I’d never witnessed divinity
    until, enfolded in Spica light,
    petite Persephone entranced
    with cold underworld awe.

    I can’t help it,
    gloomy goddesses
    turn me on.

    if Pluto interferes,
    so be it,

    I’ve orphic mysteries
    this lyre will lay down.
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

    Messages:
    1,227
    Likes Received:
    0
    That's beautiful Fulmah, I don't know what else there is to say...
     
  5. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

    Messages:
    2,270
    Likes Received:
    1
    ~* Sighs!*~ dayum....wish I could borrow an inkling of yours ( and a few others ) talents for an afternoon. Your poetry always leaves me a bit speechless, which for me is rather amazing, lol. Thanks so much, I needed a good smile.~* and btw...grrrrrrr~!!
    lol, haven't really been on much for the last two weeks, hit and run, and was annoyed that i hadda dig around for my favorite threads *snickers a bit with a sly grin and wanders back into the forums to find more*
     
  6. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

    Messages:
    1,768
    Likes Received:
    1
    That which is below is like that which is above, and that which is above is like that which is below, to accomplish the miracle of One Thing. And all things have proceeded from One, by meditation of One, so all things are born from this One Thing, by adaptation. The Sun is the Father thereof. The Moon the Mother. The Wind carried it in its belly. The Earth is its Nurse.
    Hermes Trismegistus ~The Emerald Tablet~


    constellations ix:
    winter solstice moon

    I’d never seen foundation retrograde
    till oxygen debt provokes panic attack,
    but then she made eye contact
    and collapsed, personified
    by multiplied problems,
    and reacting to a partial presence
    that would attend aftermath.

    So it was
    into courtyard’s open sky
    for cigarettes and catch-up conversation,

    sharing electrons,
    pulling on positives while
    forgetting negative information.

    Walking around the lake,
    stenciling crushed fern finish,
    teaching yoga on public stairs:

    we recounted our antiquity as
    the winter solstice moon loomed
    in spectral aerial, with maternal shield
    brandishing our mandate in supernal field.
     
  7. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

    Messages:
    1,227
    Likes Received:
    0
    Bravo! Oh how I love your constellations...I wouldn't take away, or add anything from that one! Somehow reading this, with this music playing in the background makes it sound so rich and bouncy. I really liked the first and last stanza, but the filling of the piece was just as good.
     
  8. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

    Messages:
    1,768
    Likes Received:
    1
    thanks for kind comments, kittenx!
     
  9. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

    Messages:
    1,768
    Likes Received:
    1
    Why isn’t Ophiuchus a member of the zodiac? Ophiuchus, after all, is a sun-sign (Nov. 30th – Dec. 18). The answer to the question is that Ophiuchus isn't in the Tropical Zodiac not because there is something wrong with Ophiuchus but because there is something wrong with the Tropical Zodiac. It’s an inaccurate oversimplification of the heavens dating from a time when we did not have telescopes or computers.
    paraphrased from Wikipedia

    Constellations x: Ophiuchi

    I’ve never believed in eternity
    or that a millisecond could contain
    the map of a month or millennia
    but then she asked
    you’re inspecting heaven?
    and I looked up
    and knew

    that poetic words won’t capture
    the intricacies behind human reaction
    the limbic system becomes overloaded
    vision becomes solarized in halo’s
    trying to absorb the implications
    that astronomical text actually
    attracted this charmer

    and it’s now become apparent
    that the world is indeed mysterious
    that even hardhearted pessimists
    who avoid talking on telephones
    can’t escape providence

    because all things seek equilibrium
    and imbalances must be stabilized
    and though these nerves were numb
    during interaction, I now realize

    that people are powered by batteries
    whose alkaline can be recharged
    from the celestial magnetism
    in an angel’s open question
    traveling across constellations,
    gathering Pluto’s gravity
    and descending at the intersection
    of today, here, her, and me.
     
  10. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

    Messages:
    1,227
    Likes Received:
    0
    I grinned all the way through this piece...

    [that people are powered by batteries
    whose alkaline can be recharged
    from the celestial magnetism ]

    This made me think of the lines from my own poem...
    -Love magnetizes human particles,
    extends a cord for contact outlets.-

    teehee, same concept, we're on the same wavelength!

    This I loved out of the whole the most, because it almost sounded/felt like you were talking to me... :)
    [and it’s now become apparent
    that the world is indeed mysterious
    that even hardhearted pessimists
    who avoid talking on telephones
    can’t escape providence ]
     
  11. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

    Messages:
    1,768
    Likes Received:
    1
    Thx for the reply, kitten! I don't know who I was writing that one to... and it's probably why it doesn't seem to create the atmosphere I'm usually shooting for.

    To everyone who's replied or even read these; many thanks! Hope they were enjoyed! :)
     
  12. Peregrine

    Peregrine Member

    Messages:
    397
    Likes Received:
    0
    i've but lately stumbled upon fulmar's brilliance. i bask gladly in the light emanating therefrom. you write beautifully, dude :)
     

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice