constellations

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, May 28, 2004.

  1. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    "...pandora stalks the shadows,
    divining the passageways of your heart."

    This whole thread flows, imbedded with numerous gems, a pleasure to read.
     
  2. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    "freeze frame elation" reminds me of that mindblasting eternal orgasm, the moment of utter annihilation of the self by the beloved, whatever that may be at whatever given time, in whatever given place. Devotion to the everlasting moment! Even as the smile, stretching the muscles of the face, brings us back to the dim reality from which we had striven so zealously to ascend. Yes, I tell you, all that toil for a single moment. Ah, but what a moment!

    much love :)
     
  3. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Sagittarius: Monday, September 20, 2004
    It's easy to believe in divine influence these days. Everything is going your way. Events were made to order, with your profit and delight in mind. Your abilities exceed even your own expectations. Results are immediate and beyond your wildest dreams. It doesn't matter what you did to deserve this. Explore the possibilities of this situation while it lasts.

    Constellations: Part V
    stiletto blonde aphrodite

    Horoscope got my hormones
    imparting telepathic proposals,
    commanding eye contact,
    calling you to my cubicle,
    wanting you wearing nothing
    but those stiletto heels
    and that beguiling perfume.

    I’ve been be-witched!
    Cross my heart, hope to die,
    I’d do you on this desk,
    tinker-bell; just reveal
    your fairy ambiguity
    right now, to me.

    I’ve become that teenage
    boy in heat, howling,
    in agony, god...

    I need stiletto infusion
    and a blond silk avalanche
    gripped between my fingers
    at a time when we’re unfamiliar
    just two opposing planets
    invading opposite orbits,
    newness overloading nerves.

    You, my prowling pixie,
    have my undivided attention,
    the hunter has been magnetized.
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Zexy, zexy stuff Fulmah! Im loving it. ;) That opening stanza is awe-some! And a great title too.

    No wonder I'm feeling preety good today! :D
     
  5. roly

    roly Senior Member

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    what lush and beautiful writing
    roly.xxx
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I could quote the whole passage, since I enjoyed all of it. You are
    awesome. Very nice blend of mythological fantastic elements in the anima libido, moving from tantalizing objectification of appreciation to waves of merging. Layers of perception from the office to the senses to an energetic dance... My original response was "Thats some coffee break" changed to wow, wow, wow. This seems so recent. Great work. Thank you for sharing your time, energy and poetic vision... as well as your love with so many of us struggling to express, in words, the unspeakable beauty within.
     
  7. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    fulmah, your constellation pieces are so gripping! THEY ROCK! wow, you're a very good writer.
     
  8. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Thanks for the replies, guys and gals! All your comments are most uplifting, but don't puff my head up too much! :p

    Your level of perception is most impressive, sylvan! I was actually kinda thinking someone might get offended at the objectification there... luckily, I do have a direction that this is going in... :)
     
  9. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Love, some believe, has no cause; and existing on his own right, he is instead the cause of many things. For lovers, who are transient, cannot invent Love, who is immortal and invented them, even though they may be represented as awakening him and thereby making him somehow visible to themselves and others. But then again, Love is always awakened, by drops of oil or by other means.

    ~Carlos Parada on the cause of the Trojan War

    Constellations vi:
    LibraLove

    Scales can’t measure Jupiter
    or arrest topaz prophecies,
    the arrow took you down,
    or so I thought,
    then found

    I’m hung up,
    hanged and spread up
    on this dinner conversation.
    Your quizzically arched eyebrow,
    that canyon atop painted pink lip,
    combined, could kill me.

    Truly,
    alike Persian belief,
    I declare this world tied
    to your sapphire eyes;
    they reflect the sun
    and dye the sky blue.

    I contemplate Paris’ plan
    to hide with Helen, long ago…
    I’m armed, I’ll fight armies,
    and win. Come….
     
  10. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    read the last two...whew~! mannn.....very nice!
     
  11. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Beauty follows truth into wisdom and all sail, blended in eternal manifestation, to embrace loves awakening. Immortal binary stars, dancing together, meet skimming on the surface of now, forever almost merging into the awareness beyond change.
     
  12. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Romantic, mystical and simply beautiful...



    Jupiter, topaz I know whatcha mean ;)
     
  13. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I'll choose this succulent rich blue to linger on a bit.
     
  14. 7river

    7river on a distinguished path

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    fulmah

    i did not get past page one yet, however i read part two aloud to my 14 year old daughter, her friend listening on the phone. she listened intently. i could feel it moving her.
    thank you for that, your work is beautiful
     
  15. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    KX, glad you caught that ;) I forgot to put venus in there tho, and I'm a lil upset about it, heh.
    sylvan, thanks for your wonderful presence, and I've seen parts of that movie; for some reason I think my friend knows the guy who wrote the screenplay, he's pretty cool like that, but I could be mistaken. My memory sucks.
    7river, it touches me that you actually read that aloud... I wish it were more worthy such a rendition, that one's my least favorite of the bunch, even though I've done a little work on the ending...

    Thanks for the comments, everyone! many blessings to all of you...
     
  16. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Rich and elegant work. I muse pondering the golden apple, that started the trojan war.

    http://www.loggia.com/myth/eris.html
     
  17. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    thanks for the link, sylvan... very interesting stuff there. I'm always amazed at the depths mythology goes, almost every site I go to has something to add. the one I usually go to to dig up information is

    http://homepage.mac.com/cparada/GML/TrojanWar.html

    and it's interesting, lots of nifty stuff abides in link after link
     
  18. saffronfrancisburnet

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    we could hold the moment
    and await angelic guidance
    in form of the miraculous,
    but isn’t it a miracle
    we both were here
    & our eyes even met?
    I mean, I’m sorry,
    I just can’t be convinced
    it’s mundane coincidence


    hi
    this is a wonderful verse...
    we could hold the moment.. all you write is here
    to save the moment when we realize a feeling

    ie complete love .
    thank you this poem for all to read
    not read all on your pages yet but this is one that i
    find quite revealing about your moments..
    love n peace from saff
     
  19. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    hi again spotted this poem
    what energy your world creates
    age ..has no bounderies....


    love n peace from saff


    Constellations: Part V
    stiletto blonde aphrodite

    Horoscope got my hormones
    imparting telepathic proposals,
    commanding eye contact,
    calling you to my cubicle,
    wanting you wearing nothing
    but those stiletto heels
    and that beguiling perfume.

    I’ve been be-witched!
    Cross my heart, hope to die,
    I’d do you on this desk,
    tinker-bell; just reveal
    your fairy ambiguity
    right now, to me.

    I’ve become that teenage
    boy in heat, howling,
    in agony, god...

    I need stiletto infusion
    and a blond silk avalanche
    gripped between my fingers
    at a time when we’re unfamiliar
    just two opposing planets
    invading opposite orbits,
    newness overloading nerves.

    You, my prowling pixie,
    have my undivided attention,
    the hunter has been magnetized.
    [/QUOTE]
     
  20. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Now, as the son of Resource and Poverty, Love is in a peculiar case. First, he is ever poor, and far from tender or beautiful as most suppose him...
    ~Plato - Symposium
    constellations part vii
    tank top charisma

    Evangelistic transmissions
    brainwashed my cortex
    with epileptic lures:
    silver toes, tight capris,
    tanned calves, gold anklet
    got me stuttering
    oh m - m - my
    God!

    I’ve now witnessed a goddesses descent
    down a long fluorescent lit hall,
    and in a black tank top, no doubt
    worn just to rile me up
    or bound me down.

    Take me to Venus, miss charisma,
    your planet of perfumed poisons
    and paralyzing pillow talk
    and purple neon lighting
    commands my counter.

    Crescent moon clock
    of steel and burnished brass
    above the kitchen door
    suggests reentry to reality
    right about now.

    I’ll cook breakfast,
    eggs over easy
    because you made it easy...
    riding that rocket to uncharted worlds,
    you proved that Aphrodite resides
    in the folds of an enflamed girl.
     

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