"constant discontentment"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ~piscean]-[delusions, May 22, 2004.

  1. ~ p i s c e a n ]-[ d e l u s i o n s ~ my poetry ~ constant discontentment

    This tired emotion continues to be restless
    ripping away at my insides i must feel this
    painful to think of, harmful to endure
    this terrible sadness left without a cure
    just when i thought it might come to an end
    it must begin all over once again
    i feel the pain and i look away
    thinking somehow it might be better today
    once again i prove myself wrong
    i havenÕt been right all along
    im sorry it had to be this way
    maybe ill try again another day
     
  2. Cirrhosis

    Cirrhosis Banned

    If you're going to post this frequently, please create your own thread and post there. As it is, you're bumping other people's poems off the first page and using up more bandwidth than is needed.

    Thank you.
     
  3. sure thing, sorry for being an inconvenience
     
  4. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

    i'm hearing a lot of sad words tonight. these aren't the saddest. it's good to finally see some rhymin'!
     
  5. what life gives us can only be for us alone.

    what we can do to change this is what we can use
    to achive ourselves.

    lovely emotions in this poem..
    we all have to carry the cross of pain to move onward
    and find ourselves again......

    love n peace from saff
     

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