change not ..

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, May 17, 2004.

  1. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    to all

    pain reaches far beyond,
    the stars we watch ,wondering
    eyes.
    love stollen and forgot.
    moments melt then rise.

    never tempted, change not thought
    heart emptied ,over stretched.
    body sensed a lonely path.
    feathered lives,moan not
    slow.

    pain floated past, beyond.
    rays of sun flicker on .
    dance in daylight ,in moonshine
    lust so heavy,so change
    not.....

    thank you
    how i long to express such pain
    in life love and me
    love n peace from saff
    soon i feel this will pass...thankyou for reading
     
  2. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    like i said- "there's a sky inside of all of us".


    this one really captured me, and all it takes is one to change a life forever.
     
  3. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    i will change not my unerring willingness to transform, in those flickering rays. do we find solace therein, from whence past the pain floats, a dark cerebral energy spiraling unwittingly? i enjoy the moments we share, however fleeting.

    much love :)
     
  4. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    what wonderful replys
    how timid they both seem
    thank you for true exppresion towards my words

    much love
    love n peace from saff
     
  5. Tamapoulialamafoa

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    why is your heart bleeding
    where does it belong
    they tell me it's not even
    i tell you you're wrong
     

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