carve

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chandra anjali, May 9, 2004.

  1. carve into the sun
    you ideals and battles left undone
    hope for a new day
    to take the stains, pains, and pressures away
    stare into the moonlit halls

    catch the dust with your mind
    rearrange it in the time which i left sitting
    on the coffee table

    down with downers
    up with sunshine

    carve into the sun
    your new name
     
  2. makno

    makno Senior Member

    i like it !
     
  3. Applespark

    Applespark Ingredients:*Sugar*

    I like your poem
     
  4. know1nozme

    know1nozme High Plains Drifter

    This poem had "fallen off the page" - so to speak and I didn't read it until now. Thanks Applespark, for posting to this thread.

    So positive and full of energy! Wow! Makes me smile just to read it :)
     

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