to all ... ive followed the path , in a swollen stream. temptation, the taste burned deep rolling tears, all did blind. rotten thoughts , an open mind ive gone beneath a sheltered wound. covered it licked it and spooned, none did heal.. ive flown with a burst of light many a human i know would. to melt the rays ,widen the way. the rapid waters ,oh carried me onward. banish the callous memories now ive fallen again ,wings stretched eye so free.... can this feeling ,detach even isolate that inner soul inner ME ive given all ,what more do i have begin to wonder I begin to wonder.......... now this second ,i will land thank you love n peace from saff
what brilliantly abstract imagery you have in this piece! makes for a very interesting read, like painting a picture and watching it form... well done!
