burst of light........

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by saffronfrancisburnet, May 12, 2004.

  1. to all ...

    ive followed the path , in a swollen
    temptation, the taste burned deep
    rolling tears, all did blind.
    rotten thoughts , an open mind
    ive gone beneath a sheltered
    covered it licked it and spooned,
    none did heal..
    ive flown with a burst of light
    many a human i know would.
    to melt the rays ,widen the
    the rapid waters ,oh carried
    me onward.
    banish the callous memories
    ive fallen again ,wings stretched
    eye so free....
    can this feeling ,detach even isolate
    that inner soul inner ME
    ive given all ,what more do i have
    begin to wonder I begin to wonder..........
    now this second ,i will land

    thank you love n peace from saff
  2. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

    i like it alot sounds like some of the stuff i've written some time ago
  3. lady_dreamcatcher

    lady_dreamcatcher Local Cannibal

    what brilliantly abstract imagery you have in this piece! makes for a very interesting read, like painting a picture and watching it form... well done!

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