Bluebird In The Land Of Camelot

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mysticmindlover, Jun 26, 2006.

  1. The bluebird sings a song of affectionate emotion

    Being heard across the land by the monarchs and peasants alike

    A dumbfounded respect for said bird

    Knowing not the harmonic tendencies he possesses

    Children laughing at the expense of sadness

    Joining the bluebird in his praises to the awakening morning

    The horses trotting with King and Queen filled chariots trailing behind

    Coming upon the royal grounds listening and admiring in awe as they approach, at the beloved tune which fills the morning air

    A long stare from a King to his lovely wife

    Taking her hand in his

    Exchanging love songs without a single word being spoken

    Much adu to the bird of blue

    In all its magesty and grace

    In the land of Camelot where our fine feathered friend resides

    On a branch in a tree on the courtyard

    Spreading messages of love through a subtle song and through total oblivion
     
  2. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

    Wow, it was as if a beautiful painting was being described! Well done!
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

    Dear God this poem is fantastic! It sounds great when read out loud, too, at least to me.

    And the message, it's beautiful. Spreading love and peace and joy without even knowing it, giving no thought to it at all, just a bluebird expressing his inner nature. Very Zen...
     

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