Black and White

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by naybugaboo, Jan 17, 2005.

  1. naybugaboo

    naybugaboo Member

    1
    did you touch me
    generations ago
    and did i
    touch you back
    or did your
    images intervene
    did you see
    too much white
    did i see
    too much black
    11
    did we meet in a
    different century
    was that sad song
    playing
    in your eyes
    were the acoustics
    just the same
    did i orchestrate
    your smile
    111
    were you that
    special sunset
    and was i
    that certain tree
    do i recognize
    something in you
    do you in turn
    remember me
    hey how many times
    will i meet you
    back then
    and how many
    times will i meet you again?

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  2. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

    ~* I liked this, but I know alot of it is it fits the place I am today*~
    hope to see you post more, and hopefully respond to others on this forum. Welcome~!
     
  3. kidder

    kidder Member

    'hey how many times
    will i meet you
    back then
    and how many
    times will i meet you again'
    Time is one of the great themes of poetry. I liked these lines. The past is such a big country and the future is such a forbidding place. Write on!
     

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