Beyond Fortress Europa

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  1. sentient

    sentient Senior Member

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    good one whitey

    whens the war coming?
     
  2. BodyElectric

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    /thumbsup

    Always a pleasure.
     
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    Interesting, but it needs sex, or at least some teasing romantic action. See Henry Miller's work, 'Sexus', or maybe some of Norman Mailer's stuff. You got to keep your audience interested. (By sex, I mean straight sex, not homo sex, for most of your listening audience.)
     
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    [​IMG]Thanks dd. I am not familiar with Miller's work, but I've read some books from a very close friend of his called Anais Nin. There will be some banging later on, but first I have to outlay the spores that will grow into a forest. BTW, by the end of the next episode you will discover a very familiar character.

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    Episode#26: Raysun wakes up the following morning. He has not consulted his memory gum yet, so is unaware of what happened to him the previous night.He suddenly discovers that he can speak and move freely again. For a moment he thinks he can speak to a bird outside his window, but it might be his imagination. The hospital matron sees him and orders him back in bed. While he goes back to his ward he hears the annoying sup’s door from the police station being wheeled down the corridor by two whitecoats. Raysun gets out of bed and follows them downstairs

    Episode#27: He sees the mental torture the AI of the door is subjected to, and wonders if he had to suffer the same treatment in order to get well again. There are 2 greencoats from Germany watching Dr Hari at work on a superficial organism ie the sup’s door. Their names are Chancello Nacht and Frau Muller. Apparently doors were fitted with AI to report suspicious behaviour. The door breaks down in the lab. Raysun sneaks out, but is apprehensive why the two Germans mentioned that they were interested in him (as Agent Pushkin).

    Episode#28: He passes the ward where the Oriental android is recovering and cannot resist going in to see her. She is still in a catatonic state. The doctors enter with the door from the operation, and Dr Hari asks to be left alone. He then asks Raysun to come up from under the bed, where he is hiding. Dr Hari tells Raysun his version of the truth, but being a policeman Raysun is suspicious. He then tells Raysun that the robot was designed the great professor Hikaru Zero, and is so advanced that it imitates a human being in almost every function. He then astonishes Raysun by telling him that the robot is pregnant.


    Episode#29: Raysun finally checks his memory gum and finds that Dr Hari has been spinning the truth about how he operated on him. He then hears loud voices from the ward where the Oriental robot is resting. He goes to investigate and finds the Grand Druid of Fortress Europa, Catford Stevens, the most powerful cleric, arguing with Dr Hari.The redrobe was the robot and her unborn child destroyed, but the doctor wants his experiments to complete first and then the redrobe can do whatever he wants with her. After they leave, Raysun goes to speak to the Sup’s door, and apologizes to it for disrespecting it as a self-thinking entity, and treating it as an inanimate object of no significant thought. Later, Raysun is beginning to suspect that there might be something wrong with him, but he is too tired and goes to bed.

    Episode#30: Agent Sentient shows up to sneak Raysun out of the hospital. He knows that Dr Hari and the two German greenaprons want to keep him for observation, but the Director of the PP wants him out. Raysun and Sentient break out of the hospital and go back to the scene where the robot had been mutilated, and where the animalplant had created a biohazard. This time they confront the only company that is allowed to operate in Fortress Europa, Greenforce.
     
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  9. ronald Macdonald

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    Ronnie is back and cutting the fat off morbidly obese posts

    mawaaaarrrrg !!!! hahahahahaha
    I didnt miss any of you my gladness at being back is only because I like tormenting you with inane drivell and just saying whatever comes into my head as I press the keys.

    BTW Fortress Europe is a bit stale without me appearing in it. Can you beef it up a bit by mentioning me a lot ?
     
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    [​IMG]LOL We'll see what we can do you crazyfuck clown. Welcome back you ****.:) Edit: Please try and behave yourself a bit this time. It's not as funny when you're not around, but don't upset the good people.
     
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    wow I flamethrowered them. Cool I like a bit of roast turkey
     
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  15. The GuitarMann

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    sweet man. i'm liking this story.
     
  16. raysun

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    nice story twist a abattoir used for human slaughter who would have thought it up ?
    well played whitescorpion....
     
  17. ronald Macdonald

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    possibly Fred West and his missus they ran quite a successful one in Gloucester

    yahaaa you made me famous scorpy old boy, thanks but no-one is asking for my autograph yet, will that come in time? i thought this would lead to many women chatting me up and asking for a horizontal dance

    also i imagined i would have a really smart car a porche or something so where is it?
    i keep looking outside my house but no women, no car, and no autograph hunters!
     
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    [​IMG]Pleased to see you're enjoying it, wait till you see what I have in store for you. It's just as well Ronald came along for the ride, because he is going to be needed for the battlefest ahead. You didn't think that it was going to be as easy as that did you? Tut-tut. Nothing in life is that easy, except perhaps the easy level Sudoku.

    A very big welcome to The GuitarMann. The rebels in Fortress Europa may well need your help for their revolution some day. As you are aware, music has to be played at a very low volume over there, so whacking on a big Marshall amp is likely to make all their hair fall off.
     
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    [​IMG]

    Episode#31: Raysun has left the hospital and returns to the scene of the crime with Sentient. The whole block has been transformed into a park by Greenforce (the only company allowed to operate in FE). Some of the rags (outcasts) of society are protesting that their homes are gone, but they are ignored. They meet an important greysuit called LA Matthews who explains what has happened. Suddenly, Dirty Dog, the most wanted terrorist appears, painting grafitti of a dog having a poo on top of a derelict building on the other side of the park.

    Episode#32: Raysun observes an old man whose electric wheelchair has broken down up the road. The police move in large numbers to arrest him for obstruction. At the same time Raysun spots a black unielipsoid, and a red headed woman, who enters it. She drops something behind. It is a bomb. The police redivert their vehicles and, as they do, the bomb goes off, killing and injuring people. The tiger re-appears (last seen in Regent's Park) and drags the old man away. Raysun follows them as they go down by the canal. He thinks he hears a voice warning him against that.

    Episode#33: The tiger and the old man are nowhere to be seen by the canal. Raysun thinks he is being followed, but continues past the boats until he's standing on the bridge. As he does so, one of the boats starts up. Raysun is about to jump on the boat when he is stopped by some young rags who want to mug him. The boat with the old man and the tiger has now passed and Raysun tries to escape the thugs. He is almost caught when he is saved by the person who followed him, Ronald. Ronald has converted his Crimhold gun into a flame thrower, and incinerates the gang. Behind them now, all the rags charge like a horde from the streets above. Raysun thinks that Dirty Dog must have been caught, and that the rags were trying to get back to their estate to avoid the police. There are too many to take on, so Raysun and Ronald run back across the bridge, and try and take refuge in the estate where the rags live.

    Episode#34: They hide in a confined area where the rubbish is kept. Raysun discovers that Ronald has got fatter, but is also a lot stronger than what he was. As they are discovered by the rags, they escape up the rubbish chute. Raysun looks back and sees bits and pieces of human corpses in the big metal bin.

    Episode#35: They climb up the ladder in the chute to the top where they find a Korean Benihanaist who chops up dead bodies. He pulls a gun on them, but Raysun succeds in disarming him. The Korean spills the beans about how he was hired by a Dr. Phibes to chop up bodies for their genitals, for the robot designer Hikaru Zero. In a parody of the film "300" Ronald ends up kicking the Korean down the rubbish chute to his death.
     
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