Beautiful Girl (Darling Girl)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Burbot, Jan 16, 2005.

  1. Burbot

    Burbot Dig my burdei

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    Beautiful Girl (Darling Girl)

    Sadie
    I call you on my sleepless nights
    To keep me sane when all is wrong
    Sadie
    Most wondrous and lovely woman I know

    I ask, "Is this love? How can I know?"
    Don’t need a response, but please never go

    Sadie
    I call you on the darkest of nights
    Your soul has touched me, I can’t explain
    Sadie
    You’re one of a kind, most special to me

    Whenever I think, you come in my mind
    The thoughts that linger warm my mind

    Sadie
    Your soul is the moon, deep in my heart
    The stars cannot compare to your beauty
    Lady Sarah
    Beautiful girl with beautiful soul

    Sadie
    Sadie
     
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

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    I know all about those 'darkest nights.' I liked the feel of this poem. I liked its readability, its sayability and its share-ability. Keep writing!
     
  3. Burbot

    Burbot Dig my burdei

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    thanks for the kind words kidder
     
  4. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

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    Awww... that's really sweet, Trevor. :) I liked it a whole lot. Is this based on the girl we're always hearing about?
     
  5. Burbot

    Burbot Dig my burdei

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    ya, i strte thining of her in English class and scibbled this down that afternoon
     
  6. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    "Your soul is the moon, deep in my heart
    The stars cannot compare to your beauty."

    how beautiful... i'm feelin' this one! :)
     
  7. Burbot

    Burbot Dig my burdei

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    well ill keep on replying to every response and say: THANK YOU, THANK YOU ALL!!! to be brutally honest, i never liked my poetry, these kind words have really given me a boost of confidence...
     

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