Beautiful Girl (Darling Girl) Sadie I call you on my sleepless nights To keep me sane when all is wrong Sadie Most wondrous and lovely woman I know I ask, "Is this love? How can I know?" Don’t need a response, but please never go Sadie I call you on the darkest of nights Your soul has touched me, I can’t explain Sadie You’re one of a kind, most special to me Whenever I think, you come in my mind The thoughts that linger warm my mind Sadie Your soul is the moon, deep in my heart The stars cannot compare to your beauty Lady Sarah Beautiful girl with beautiful soul Sadie Sadie
I know all about those 'darkest nights.' I liked the feel of this poem. I liked its readability, its sayability and its share-ability. Keep writing!
Awww... that's really sweet, Trevor. I liked it a whole lot. Is this based on the girl we're always hearing about?
"Your soul is the moon, deep in my heart The stars cannot compare to your beauty." how beautiful... i'm feelin' this one!
well ill keep on replying to every response and say: THANK YOU, THANK YOU ALL!!! to be brutally honest, i never liked my poetry, these kind words have really given me a boost of confidence...