avocado

If I were an avocado



I would focus all my energy



and call out to a beautiful young woman



fierce is her desire



her innocence



she will come to me



and pick me from our tree



then later maybe



sitting on a rock



on a high ledge looking out on a gorge



she shares me with her lover



maybe they scoop me out with tortilla chips



whilst reciting the works of Blake



and now it is done



we are bound and I shall feel their love



and this day shall not be forgotten





i should have posted this here because it was just a random thought while fixing my tea and stareing at a couple of ripe avocodi on the counter.

really would like my journal back...

 

and i shall never look at an avocado the same

 

that is all i wanted to hear

 

would a banana work. thats what i had for breakfast. lol

 

now don't turn this pure beautiful thought into a erotic physical joy...i want people leaving this thread loving their fruit in a spiritual way, not getting turned on...

 

now i cannot help how my words were interpretted. i wasnt even attempting a sexual play with this. i was simply asking if any fruit/vegetable would do, or if it had to be an avocado.

you better check yourself buddy!

 

I am glad your journal does'nt work...what I nice set of words to stumble upon in these random thoughts.

 

differences between erotic and spiritual love are but an illusion

 

check myself? ohhh no, i'm good at this. that energy was there sister...but yes a banana would work.

 

wish i could eat an avocado....with my lover....while sitting on a rock on a high ledge looking out on a gorge....

 

thank you kim and marie you do have a point...but the energy was still there, do not deny it...won't help.

 

lol..........i love to write something with one intent and to have someone read them(cause they were intentionally written to have a double meaning)another way.

but honestly ron.....that was brilliant and beautiful. and i apologize if you feel i took from that

and by the way i can deny anything that i wish!the beauty of being on a computer

 

marie and whoever else is in the know....you know what this lovely poem reminds me of? skinny legs and all....

 

no apoligies we all add to the patina...

 

it does have that appeal. i loved that book. what was your favorite part? the ending . the 7 veils part?

 

please share

 

good cause i find it all extremely entertaining


and skinny legs and all is a book by tom robbins. if you have never checked him out...................DO! you will become addicted

 

the whole book is amazing! the seven veils part was definetly intense.....

and i would agree...tom robbins is addictive....

 

tom robbins is a master for sure.

lol, 7, this is why women fall in love you. so funny.

 

*Sigh* That was beautiful.....