Discussion in 'Random Thoughts' started by 7river, May 12, 2004.

  1. 7river

    7river on a distinguished path

    If I were an avocado

    I would focus all my energy

    and call out to a beautiful young woman

    fierce is her desire

    her innocence

    she will come to me

    and pick me from our tree

    then later maybe

    sitting on a rock

    on a high ledge looking out on a gorge

    she shares me with her lover

    maybe they scoop me out with tortilla chips

    whilst reciting the works of Blake

    and now it is done

    we are bound and I shall feel their love

    and this day shall not be forgotten

    i should have posted this here because it was just a random thought while fixing my tea and stareing at a couple of ripe avocodi on the counter.

    really would like my journal back...
  2. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

    and i shall never look at an avocado the same:)
  3. 7river

    7river on a distinguished path

    that is all i wanted to hear:)
  4. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

    would a banana work. thats what i had for breakfast. lol
  5. 7river

    7river on a distinguished path

    now don't turn this pure beautiful thought into a erotic physical joy...i want people leaving this thread loving their fruit in a spiritual way, not getting turned on...:)
  6. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

    now i cannot help how my words were interpretted. i wasnt even attempting a sexual play with this. i was simply asking if any fruit/vegetable would do, or if it had to be an avocado.

    you better check yourself buddy!
  7. HoneySuckleBlue

    HoneySuckleBlue Cosmic Artist

    I am glad your journal does'nt work...what I nice set of words to stumble upon in these random thoughts.
  8. ChiefCowpie

    ChiefCowpie hugs and bugs

    differences between erotic and spiritual love are but an illusion
  9. 7river

    7river on a distinguished path

    check myself? ohhh no, i'm good at this. that energy was there sister...but yes a banana would work.
  10. scarlettchasingroses

    scarlettchasingroses strawberry tart

    wish i could eat an avocado....with my lover....while sitting on a rock on a high ledge looking out on a gorge....
  11. 7river

    7river on a distinguished path

    thank you kim and marie you do have a point...but the energy was still there, do not deny it...won't help.
  12. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

    lol..........i love to write something with one intent and to have someone read them(cause they were intentionally written to have a double meaning)another way.

    but honestly ron.....that was brilliant and beautiful. and i apologize if you feel i took from that

    and by the way i can deny anything that i wish!the beauty of being on a computer
  13. scarlettchasingroses

    scarlettchasingroses strawberry tart

    marie and whoever else is in the know....you know what this lovely poem reminds me of? skinny legs and all....
  14. 7river

    7river on a distinguished path

    no apoligies we all add to the patina...
  15. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

    it does have that appeal. i loved that book. what was your favorite part? the ending . the 7 veils part?
  16. 7river

    7river on a distinguished path

    please share
  17. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

    good cause i find it all extremely entertaining

    and skinny legs and all is a book by tom robbins. if you have never checked him out...................DO! you will become addicted
  18. scarlettchasingroses

    scarlettchasingroses strawberry tart

    the whole book is amazing! the seven veils part was definetly intense.....

    and i would agree...tom robbins is addictive....
  19. mynameiskc

    mynameiskc way to go noogs!

    tom robbins is a master for sure.

    lol, 7, this is why women fall in love you. so funny.
  20. antithesis

    antithesis Hello

    *Sigh* That was beautiful.....

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