Another One(written poem)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dogfood420, Jan 6, 2005.

  1. dogfood420

    dogfood420 Member

    My Day Interupted

    My day was interupted by an angel.
    Eyes bating thrusting foward on her hips, I can't help but to speak.

    My lust, my love at first site.
    your beauty, -to me-
    is beyond godly understanding.

    -An overwhelming force-
    brought us both here to meet,
    and destiny creates our flattered surroundings.

    To touch, - this goddess-
    leaves me greatly teased,
    consumes and eats at my thoughts.

    Written about my fiance who I love very much. I actually wrote this acouple of days after we met and I just thought I would share it. By the way she is Peace_Is_possible

  2. aaaawww you're so sweet! I love ya babe!!!!!!
  3. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

    I love the last stanza.

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