animism free verse

Discussion in 'Animism' started by bradofcentralpa, May 8, 2004.

  1. i apoligize it took the form of a shitey poem, but sometimes easier, however pretensious seeming:

    Is that old impassive rock not alive?
    Could it have tricked its mind into believing it wills my path obstructed by its weight?
    Could I not be a boulder's hands, moving other boulders at its commands?
    My hand surely is not alive--
    But would I ask it?
    And when it answer--for an answer, positive or negative, is always there-- would i believe it? would I believe that it answered?
    I have tricked myself into believing my brain enslaves my body when a dialogue exists between all parts.
    I do hope, for his sake, that my friend, the rock has no delusions of grandeur...that he controls the wind which dries his flesh, or the river moves his earthen legs;
    And I hope the same for myself.
  2. themnax

    themnax Senior Member

    hey that was fun

    and please don't call your efforts "shitty"
    we are all too fallable to relyably judge ourselves
  3. honeyhannah

    honeyhannah herbuhslovuh

    I didn't think it was shitty at all.

    I really enjoyed it.
  4. fractalated

    fractalated Member

    hey that was really cool :)
  5. Applespark

    Applespark Ingredients:*Sugar*

  6. thanks...i thought nobody would ever reply
  7. Tamee

    Tamee naked

    liked it..........
  8. mikopanic

    mikopanic Member

    i think it is important that nobody has delusions of grandeur
  9. cerridwen

    cerridwen in stitches

  10. 2cool

    2cool Member

    Pretty cool. I liked it. TY 4 posting.

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