Across the Room

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by deram_scholzara, May 25, 2007.

  1. deram_scholzara

    deram_scholzara Member

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    Across the Room

    Such boundless - awareness
    but I'm sorry - you're caught in - your sweet little misery
    I listen - to your lips - but you just speak without using your ears

    Dance 'round - your fortunes
    'till y'wake up - and lie there - honesty balanced on a pin
    I don't think - that you have - ever really stopped to see you

    So take this
    ___and take that
    Just watch it
    ___grow up around
    ______and all through
    _____________________you
    You're just fine
    ___'cause you're smiling when you're sad

    Perception - do'n't matter
    I'm so glad - you're so high - on dreaming by yourself
    that you can't - see what I - see glowing off your precious face

    So take this
    ___and take that
    Just watch it
    ___grow up around
    ______and all through
    _____________________you
    You're just fine
    ___'cause you're smiling when you're sad
     
  2. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    I_______________like!
     
  3. Miss_Beatle

    Miss_Beatle Beatlemaniac

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    Cool poem :)
     
  4. SweetMarie

    SweetMarie Member

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    Interesting...If it were a little longer, it'd make a good song! I like it.
     

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