A Tale Of A Fisherman Lost At Sea. New Song/ Video! Feedback Welcome :)

Hello everyone
Here's a new song called I'll Be Home.
The video is about a fisherman who loves & hates life on the Ocean and was all shot in 4K HD quality.
We had so much fun making this, it was a real adventure and id love to hear any comments or feedback good or bad.
Feel free to share also if you enjoyed

I'll Be Home (Official Video)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EGbNRNbQN4g

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The video is beautiful. The lyrics, your voice, and playing are great.

The only thing that I noticed, since you asked, is it sounds a bit monotonous for my taste.

 

Thank you both for the great feedback much appreciated and the well wishes too!!
Cheers

 

You are welcome and the video truly is beautiful!

 

Thanks again

 

Anyone else care to leave me a comment or feedback?
Would love to hear from you guys

 

That was amazing. Superb guitar playing, nice ambient backing instruments and the highest quality in video I've ever seen. The shots taken were magnificent as well! I love it when people in pictures or video are able to pretend you aren't there at all and you can capture true emotion, the pure essence of a human. Being. Very cool. Best music video I've seen in a long time.

During the chorus, I'd love to hear how it would sound (when you sing the word 'home') to hold the base note rather than up and down scaling. Maybe throw in some reverb to make your voice and the word echo into the background... Just some critique of a wandering musical mind. I love it tho. Can't wait to hear what else you come up with!

 

Hey thanks very much for the great comment.
Makes me very happy to know you enjoyed it to this level.
A lot of effort went in as you can see
Thanks again and yes plenty more on the way.

 

Here's the lyrics for this track for those who like to think about the story etc :guitarist:

I'll Be Home Lyrics
V1 I've been torn by the rain and snow
my hands filled with cracks so old
every scar is a place and time
a fight on the ocean line
Oh life on the sea .... for me ..... me ....
I rise with the sound of hope
but fear i've still far to go
my mind broken down by the winds
a soul black and blue worn thin
Oh life on the sea .... for me ..... me ....
But one of these tides..........

C1 Ill be home.......
No more nights drifting on my own
Ill be home.......
Living life with my feet on stone
But on of these tides..........
Ill be home....... Home.........

V2 I can't see past the waves and fog
my face bruised and beaten so raw
every task is a chore and climb
this war i've been faced is mine
Oh life on the sea .... for me ..... me ....
I wait for my time to come
but now i've got work needs done
those dreams deep within my heart
one day a new place to start
Oh life on the sea .... for me ..... me ....
But one of these tides..........

C2 Ill be home.......
No more nights drifting on my own
Ill be home.......
Living life with my feet on stone
But one of these tides..........
Ill be home....... Home.........
Home........ Home.........

 

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