As day turns into night again my head start to spin memories that wont escape within. Your smile your eyes your voice and your love is what I long to see and hear once again. For one more day with you I would give everything to tell you that I love you, how much I care. I feel you looking down at me the words I never said you've heard We'll meet again one day on the other side untill then forever in my thoughts and always in my heart is where you'll be good night my brother
That's really good. Short, but the meaning/point you're getting at shines with the wordplay you used. Though it's sad, I like it. It has a sort of... tancity to it?
